The Red-Hot Era: This Young Public Security Officer Has an Intel System

I have a suggestion for you, the author. You should read Li Laifu's book. Many of the things he wrote are worth learning from, but don't be as sloppy as what he wrote.

It's nice to watch and has a very warm feeling. After watching it, I kind of miss the old people at home😭

I have never made any comments since I read the book. If it looks good, I will read it. If it doesn't, I will just discard it. But what can I say about this book? Just one word: water. I have never seen anything so watery. It has been more than ten years since I read the novel. This is the first time I have seen anything so watery. The author also needs to take a break. If he continues to be so stupid, many people will probably give up. The main plot is generally understandable, and even a trivial matter can be written for ten chapters. Oh my god, isn't it indiscriminate?

To be honest, this novel is very childish. An old bookworm like me can't stand it.

Very beautiful, very real, update soon

There are many small details that are not described clearly. For example, when the live wild boar was put into the space at the beginning, it was not explained whether it was dead or alive. The dead should be ignored and the living should be eaten; another example is that some meat was left to grandma, but it was not explained how to dispose of the meat temporarily; and where the half of the pigs that were traded in the pigeon market came from. The protagonist put the whole wild boar into the space without killing it; there was also very little description of the environment, how cold was it, and how rainy? Snow? Rain plus snow? When it's cold, the state of the people around you, the state of plants, and the state of the environment are not described very well; it's up to us readers to figure this out. An intelligence system has storage space, planting space, and a spiritual spring that can improve physical fitness. Then that information is available or not. Just like in reality, I have such a space + spiritual spring, I am self-sufficient, grow vegetables and sell meat, do I still need to be the social animal who suffers, suffers, and works overtime every day? There is no need to fight with other people. The police have to fight wits and courage with criminals. There is no description in the article of the protagonist improving himself through training. The scene of catching criminals is an understatement. What is a spy? Will he surrender obediently when the police point a gun at him?

💩, The plot is frustrating, in order to lengthen it, it is forced to be watery, making the plot drag out and have no rhythm.

At first I thought it was very interesting, and the intelligence system constantly drove changes in the plot. However, after the one hundred and forty chapter, the author seemed to be unable to write the content, and the plot was brought back to the courtyard, which made people feel cliched and boring. What a pity!

It's so slow to copy books.

I'm still fishing after dozens of chapters, and I keep repeating that meat is precious. Can't stand it anymore