After Time Travel, I Built a Paradise in the Mountains

This is the author himself. Many people said that it ended too quickly, but in fact it didn't. Only two parts of the branch content were deleted. One is the island part. The outline includes the story of Xie Tianhao Luoya and Haihua's affair with her. If it is not important, I will omit it. Second, after Zhao Zhou ascended the throne, the outline was arranged to write about the next generation, Yan Qing Qing Lan, Mingyue Shui Yang, Yan Lu Yu'an, and Tieshan Yu Ning. However, the new book had inspiration, so it was omitted. Overall, the story of Hong Guo and Zhao Shiwu was successfully completed. I feel 90% satisfied. What I am not satisfied with is the channel problem. Many mistakes have been corrected and not shown. I will pay attention to the next book. The new book is in the archives and will be released next month. It will be online in March or April. Please pay attention to it. Spread the flowers.

The structure of this plot is good. The first part is long and boring. It would be better if it could be compressed to more than half. The following plot is fascinating. I hope I can stick to the title of the novel and stick to it to the end.

In fact, if many authors are not familiar with crops, they would write less about crops. Even if they are novels, they may not seem like much, but they may mislead some urban people who do not understand them.

The heroine from a medical family dressed as a peasant widow, was kicked out by her stepmother-in-law while pregnant, and returned to her brother's house. My brother died, my sister-in-law remarried, my three children were wiped out by my aunt, and the house was occupied and they lived in shacks. The heroine asked for her house back and took the children to plant sweet potatoes to make vermicelli and collect herbs. The male protagonist is not dead. He finds the female protagonist after he comes back and grows Ganoderma lucidum together. The male protagonist is reborn and knows that two years later the world will be in chaos and rebels will emerge. The male protagonist finds a valley, and the female protagonist takes in the refugees and arranges them to go into the valley to cultivate land. They also find iron ore and gold mines, and the male protagonist raises troops. The heroine's ex-boyfriend also came through. He was a science student and a shooting enthusiast. He helped the tribe make cement, make explosives and crossbows, and build a navy. The heroine creates a paradise where the old and the young are supported, equality between men and women, compulsory education, and monogamy. The couple gave birth to two sons and two daughters, unified the country, the two saints came to the court, and the world was peaceful and prosperous.

It's pretty! It is an idealized time travel novel for modern people, quite complete! If you are not interested in reading, you can go read it!

If Zhao Shiwu can't kill his enemies with his own hands or cut his nurse into pieces with a thousand cuts, I won't watch it.

The writing is very good, but the heroine is a bit like a saint. In reality, a person who is too kind-hearted cannot be a ruler. Some settings are not very reasonable. For example, the male protagonist takes the initiative to save his sister-in-law and her family as hostages. Doesn't he think about his wife and children? Didn't he know that he would be leaderless? Isn't he worried that the weapons he brought with him, similar to hand bombs, will be used by the enemy Barbarian King's men to blow up his comrades and former subordinates? Weapons are dismantled for prevention?

Bah, you are moaning for no reason. Deliberately asking the hero not to kill the stepmother's son and keep it for the New Year? Are you afraid that you won't be able to write?

The more I watch, the angrier I get. The male and female protagonists are both confused, stupid and virginal, with no long memory. They always seem to be great and loyal, but in fact they can't protect their own family. They are impulsive and brainless.

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