The Game Has Been Cultivating Immortality for a Billion Years, and Now He Has Become an Emperor!

The subject matter is good, but the content is average. The emperor in the game actually does not have his own Taoist magic powers and has only limited cultivation. Moreover, if the immortality pill is given to mortals, won't they be afraid of exploding their bodies? The emperor can't change his appearance when he meets a mortal? That's nonsense. The more you write, the more messy it becomes, which doesn't look good.

A standard marketing article, the first two or three chapters are very exciting, then the plot starts to get steamy, and the end is unfinished. At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist is omnipotent, and then it is said that the protagonist is dying for various reasons, and the previous and subsequent plots are very contradictory. Basically, every chapter will refute the setting of the previous chapter, and the writing is very confusing.

It's not good-looking. I'm afraid of that word!

Why is this book just a self-pleasure novel? Many of the plots are mindless, and the data ratings are probably brushed up. More than 60,000 people have read it, but there are only more than 300 comments.

It's so embarrassing. It vividly depicts a beggar who has never been out of the village and writes about the life of the world's richest man. He actually gets a 90% rating. Who is reading this?

It's not that no one has reached the level of the Supreme Emperor. Why are you still so bad? Brothers have no sense of existence. A holy king can break the ban you set. It's too far.

Let me summarize. First of all, his setting is very strange. The game world has become a reality. The setting of your immortal cultivation game where one protagonist is awesome and the others are younger brothers is too nonsense. It is mindless and fun, but there is no feeling of pleasure. The middle stage of the plot is too complicated. Journey to the West, the Eastern mythology system, and the immortal cultivation system are all integrated. It is too messy. Why can't you stick to the immortal cultivation system to the end? There are too many other flaws. I don't want to complain about learning from other people's ways of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. I beg you.

Still in that sentence, what exactly did you write? Why are there nine points? To be honest, I can't even watch it without my brain.

How should I put it? When you look at the title and introduction, it looks like the kind of invincible article. Logically speaking, it should be invincible or close to invincible in its entirety. However, it turns out that it was invincible at the beginning, and then it involved other worlds and turned into a cultivation article. It looks like a four-dimensional article.

It's all full of shortcomings. The combat power collapsed at the beginning. Not only did it collapse, it was also chaotic. The plot was also completely useless and I didn't know what to say. Not to mention the nine points, the eight points were even higher.