Weiyi: Stop Showing Off, Weiyi Is so Pissed Off by You.

I have been looking forward to it for two years... All in tears! ! ! I thought you were addicted to disappearing when you went to bed early... The new book feels very good too! The tickets are given with both hands... It's time to start a new life of reminders! Come on come on!

Looking forward to the stars and the moon, I finally wait for you! Let us embark on a new journey with Ning Yi, who is as doggy as Su Chen, and Jiang Cha, who is as beautiful as Hong Yi! I hope that the theme of this book still reflects the evil and kindness of human nature, the attachment and determination, and the cowardice and bravery! Let's shout that! "Unity, courage and unwavering loyalty are the greatest strengths of mankind!"

Although the update has stopped, the author's foreshadowing is really awesome, and the plot concept really shows that he has a solid foundation! However, the tone of this article is still too exaggerated. Really, I prefer the previous one. It is humorous and exaggerated but does not lose the narrative. I hope the author can maintain it in the new book. There is really nothing to complain about. The fact that a new book has been published after two years shows that the author's ideas are grand and there are many lines. It shows that the story has been carefully thought out, and there is no reason to criticize the author! It's useless for me to keep the gold coins, so I might as well just give them all to this book... Xiaona

Guesses and solutions to the author's shortcomings in this book Guess: There is a big logical flaw in this book, that is, Jiang Cha is constantly providing hints to the protagonist, but according to logic, Ning Yi knows that Jiang Cha is the boss, but Jiang Cha is unaware. In other words, all the protagonist's inferences are self-contradictory. And it's very obvious. After getting this information and looking back at those reasonings, the tone of "I am a little genius" will really break your defense. (I have made a similar comment before, and the author found it to be very reasonable.) And it has a real and huge impact, because this plot combines the author's two core competencies - the protagonist has a brain and strict logic, and rubs it directly on the ground, or rubs it repeatedly. Regardless of whether this is the shortcoming mentioned by the author, this is a real problem that needs to be solved. Solution: For a plot to reduce intelligence, the shorter it is written, the lower the sense of existence, the more questionable the sentence, and the less sensitive the audience will be to it. Therefore, the core idea of ​​​​solving is the word "drag", delaying the outbreak of the problem until the truth is revealed, and the problem will naturally no longer be a problem. Specific plan: Delete a lot of the reasoning about the boss in the first book to reduce the sense of existence. You can also use affirmative sentences at this time. In the interval after the end of the first book, the protagonist's reasoning still needs to be retained, but it cannot be lengthy. It needs to be as concise as possible and use slightly questionable words such as "So..." "Could it be..." And finally add the sentence "The boss can't understand the mind" to minimize the impact of the reasoning problem. At the same time, Jiang Cha's two prompts were changed to be closer to the prompts, and closer to the solution that the protagonist came up with (it doesn't matter if the character design is a little broken, and the protagonist that can be used in the future is too strong, so the character design is changed back for reasons such as it is ruined, and by doing this, you can also use Jiang Cha's mouth to provide advice to the protagonist in the future, killing two birds with one stone) There is no problem in using this statement to survive the ancient town dungeon. In the third book, you can find a reason to make the protagonist become entangled in Jiang Cha's identity. But this time there was a reason—Yi Jiang Cha's two tips were both right. And in this entangled state, the protagonist will also listen to ginger tea, and it will not affect the plot. In the fourth book's time loop, the two learned about each other's past, resolved their misunderstandings, and confirmed their relationship in one fell swoop. Moreover, readers will not feel that the protagonist has been entangled for too long in this process, because this copy is about the past of the two of them, which itself is a process of constant revelation. Why I put it in the negative review column (the lack of people is also a factor) is because I am opposed to the author's judgment. The reason is simple: the more foreshadowings are buried, the less exciting the early plot will be, because many problems cannot be explained. This is an indisputable fact. If you give up in the early stage, readers will never come. And another major problem is that the author also said that the abandonment rate is because many old readers hoard books, which affects Qimao's promotion of this book. Then when they all come back to read it, this problem will be solved. When the time comes, combined with the excellent articles that have been written later, it will definitely skyrocket. Isn't that the last book? The most popular time is towards the end. If all the foreshadowing is abandoned in the early stage, it becomes a bug. Why should it attract readers? Why not persevere and wait for the moment when the hidden dragon rises into the abyss.

Year after year, congratulations on the return of the early to bed and early rise that disappeared due to exercise [Applause] The protagonist Ning Yi successfully inherited Su Chen's deception rules and once (in the previous life) deceived the heroine into a mental hospital [Dog Head] [Dog Head] The theme is novel [Star Eyes] The male and female protagonists are both reborn and return, and they all think that the other is a big boss [Dog Head] So... The male protagonist and the female protagonist boldly do things, under various psychological hints, the beginning is amazing! [Dog Head] Ahem... I've said all that needs to be said, let's follow the protagonist's footsteps and destroy the dungeon world together! Ahem...(Off the stage [Dog Head])

I know you're here to read the bad reviews, so don't think too much about it, just read it and it's over, it's guaranteed to be good-looking! ! !

Highly recommended. The writing style of Fitness Brother is still so funny. The overall plot is about the knife interspersed with small happiness, not very sad, and the hand is interspersed with the knife at zero frame. It is really wonderful.

After a year of waiting, finally! I read it after the last book was finished. After reading it, I found out that the author said that he would publish a new book every two months, but I haven't read it yet. I thought I would stop writing. Recently, I suddenly wanted to read the rules and weird stories again, so I read it again and found the new book at the end 📖. It was such a surprise (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

This is also a new book that I have been looking forward to for going to bed early and getting up early. I have been chasing it for a long time in junior high school. The author has been putting it off again and again. Just when I thought I was running away, the new book is finally here. It still has a supernatural theme. Ning Banxian reappears the deception style of Su Da. A supernatural coming "She slowly stood up in the strange tide, her black skirt swaying lightly, and the strange torrent suddenly crawled to the ground." "He was alone, swimming upstream, with a slight smile on his face, no fear, and walked firmly towards the treacherous torrent." "Be sure to invite him/her to become a player!" The two of them thought to themselves. "Master, can you calculate the year when my life took a critical turning point?" "Master, do you really believe that there is magic in the world?" With the help of special filters, the two played psychological games for themselves, making them laugh frequently. In the copy, the author returns to his old profession, the town rules of Linyue Town, reappears the strange stories about the rules, the village has spooky things, and the weird protagonist reappears. There must be many book friends who read the previous book. I haven't seen you for a year. I wish you all a happy reading! 🎉🎉🎉

It's all tears, it's all tears. Although it has only been updated for more than 20 times, I watched it twice and found that there are a lot of foreshadowings. Let me tell you what I know so far: the identity of the master, the origin of the audience, Jiang Cha's sister, who organized this stage, and why the master said that the host is new (referring to the big eyes) , who talks to the master (is it the rule itself?), The author's view of Su Chen's back (is it directly related to the audience? Or Fengdu), and some others you can guess for yourself. To be honest, the plot is indeed richer and more delicate. The author's writing is more aggressive than before. I feel that Su Chen is angry. I recommend it😏