Many Children, Many Blessings, from a Hundred Wives and a Thousand Sons to an Eternal Immortal Dynasty

Thanks a lot.

Personally I think it's a pretty good book. I think the author's protagonist didn't make enemies everywhere during his development. He made friends with various other forces and powerful people in the book. I think this is normal. Many other types of books have the protagonist making enemies everywhere, making them look bad in the face, which makes them look ugly after reading too much. Then the author will write some interesting stories about the children of the protagonists, such as Ye Tianyong, Ye Zhengwen and his brother (forgot his name😂) and Ye Tianyu and so on. Finally, I hope the author will continue to write more stories about the protagonist's children. I believe your book will be popular!

The storyline is well-organized. The storyline needs to be detailed and the plot needs to be slowed down a bit. The name of the big demon still needs to be worked out, but the name of the sect is okay.

All brothers are welcome to come and support! Thank you very much

The protagonist is like a little kid. He gets startled and explodes when nothing happens. He has been cultivating immortality in a sect for ten years. He is like a novice. He just asks the system when nothing happens. He has too many conversations with the system. The protagonist's personality is too jumpy and immature. He has the IQ of a child.

You are forcing the ending, why is it capped when you reach the Earth Immortal? If you are not satisfied with the ending, I will give you a so-so ending, bye bye.

It is written later that even the wife is married, even though she is many generations away from her young age,

Not bad!

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

Nice