The Goddess Gave Birth to a Boy and a Girl
女神给我生了龙凤胎
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 790k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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380Chapters
527kPopularity
930Readers
2.6kMust-read votes
9.3Score
3.3kRatings
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The first 50% is pretty good, but then things start to go round and round. When it comes to foreigners, we all resort to wisdom. We don't even care about the theme. Is it about having sex with your wife, kidding, or fighting? All in all, the plot is not rich, and the imagination is not big enough. You can basically catch the whole story at a glance, and the echoes before and after are barely interesting. The timeline is short and vague. What's the point of paving the way for the mother-in-law's second child? The protagonist's system is from another time and space, and it also foreshadows the hallucination of the protagonist's mother. Very early on, I guessed that my daughter could fight. The system was created by my son's research and development. I only saw 92% of it, which made me a little disgusted. I don't know if it was written later. Regarding writing about children, you can see that Lin Ran's daughter Xiao Yue has been loved by readers since she was a child. If you look at treasure hunting all over the world, Zhang Jing has many girlfriends and many children. From time to time, he will use very few words to pull it out and walk around to prove that it is still online. However, the theme of treasure hunting has not changed. The plot is rich, the imagination is big, and the plot is rational. You see, Nine Realms Mortal Immortals is a bit watery and the plot is rich. Can you turn it around and reveal the secrets step by step?
I can only say that it is so-so. Many places are illogical. If there is no logic, anyone can be a writer, right?
It's very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. It's over before the level of Nei Zheng is reached.
It's so bad
Overall, it's okay. From the perspective of martial arts, the author still has something. The beginning of the article is okay, but then it starts to go off track. There is no sense of system and some branch lines that have no beginning or end. The ending is not too rushed. Friendly praise.
It feels pretty good, but the emotional line is too slow.
The front was ok
I hate writing martial arts in the city the most