The Return of the Immortal of the City

The moment I opened the book, I felt a surge of spiritual energy gushing out of it. When I read the third chapter, I was met with backlash. I used my last strength to warn my descendants that they must never open this book.

This is what I wrote, and it ended like this. I ran out of money to write it or I terminated the contract with the platform. This can no longer be described as unfinished. I can only say that half of it is gone. There are also typos in the key points. It doesn't matter if there are a few. The key is that the typos are one after another.

Too many typos

It looks great, please update it soon.

Chaos

There are a lot of typos and a lot of characters are mixed up.

Behind them are male and female protagonists.

It's too childish, like a child's daydream, and the logic is messy and verbose.

Why don't you put the Qiankun Ring when you have a bank card and a mobile phone? They lose it every time!

Either grow or be invincible. I can't go up, I can't go down, I'm so crazy