Daughter Abandons Concubine

This book is well written. The author has put all his effort into describing Lin Yunran's appearance, dialogue, actions, and psychology. He is especially good at shaping characters. Ling Tianmo, if not others, must have been surpassed by Lin Yunran in the later period and stepped on to make him regret it. This is a bit like the forced marriage routine in many novels. When I saw Han Ziche later, I thought this person was the male protagonist at first, but when I saw the author's finishing touches that seemed to have some intention, I instantly understood that no matter how he was positioned, this person was definitely not the male protagonist. However, I still suggested that the author should tell us about Long Zhaohua at the beginning of the novel. Otherwise, after reading it for about ten minutes, I realized... It turns out that the young man in black in the restaurant and the person secretly observing is the Prince of the East Palace. There is another shortcoming. The author may be lacking in the general background of Lin Yunran's time travel. Many of the characters involved were pulled out of his mind, such as the second most powerful person in the capital and the second god of war in the imperial court. It would be better to mention these as early as possible. Fairy, please don't mind the above suggestions. I also write long articles when I meet a writer I like. If you can see it, I hope you can forgive me. Thank you for bringing me joy and the anticipation of reading books.

Everyone has a treasured feeling in their heart. When they read these romantic time-travel novels, they have thought about whether they can time-travel themselves, and have touched those princes, princes, and emperors. They also imagined that those objects must be tall, handsome, funny, cool, and only in love with themselves. The feeling that Lin Yunran gave me was the same expectation and difference that I had. She was a killer in her previous life. When she traveled back in time and met a wealthy businesswoman who forced her to get married, the resistance and arrogance she showed made me find something I could empathize with. At one point, it even made me feel as if I was Lin Yunran. . . . (Don't get me wrong, I'm not a killer😀) When Lin Yunran laughed and scolded the scumbag, I felt a kind of heartfelt and spiritual recognition. After Lin Yunran solved the problem of debt collection, these feelings of substitution made me want to stop. I seemed to have found a feeling of being recognized. . . Like. . . The only flaw is Han Ziche. I feel that there may be a reversal in the later stage, but I personally hope that this person can become an excellent second male lead. To many extent, Han Ziche has taken on the responsibility and burden of the family. Although he is extremely wealthy, he has taken on the responsibility of an older brother when his younger brother is not at home. I hope that the next time I see Han Ziche, he will still be a good person. At present, this possibility is relatively small. After all, people who start from the family will sacrifice their personal inner feelings to a greater extent. .

First, why did Lin Yunran spend so much effort to go to Jinzhou but felt that nothing happened? He was looking forward to the assassination of the King of Hell but did not happen Secondly, Long Zhaohua has nothing to do with the court affairs. He is in love every day, so why is he so evil? Is it simply because he has a halo that he is evil? Third, it is suggested that Lin Yunran change his name and Lin Gengxin

The author adds more: I am willing to eat my husband alive

I can't stand most of the articles on female videos. Every heroine must have a beautiful body that will conquer the entire country, and she will always be surrounded by several handsome and handsome male partners who just fall in love with the heroine and are devoted to her. What can I say about this novel? Lin Yunran is not the typical woman who relies on her face to make a living. That kind of woman probably only exists in imagination. She has her own thoughts. Even if she was a famous killer in her previous life, after each step of the plot development, the character's thoughts are still well developed. This is why I like reading this book. But among the boys, Long Zhaohua is quite interesting. Others can be seen as supporting characters at a glance, which I don't like. I think the characters in the book should be flesh-and-blood, and shouldn't be such a rigid setting. Overall, I still enjoyed watching it, and I support it a lot~~~~da call

It is recommended not to watch it. The male protagonist, the prince, is stupid and scumbag at the end, using the female protagonist to save the palace maid in his heart. The palace maid is obviously Bai Lianhua. When the male protagonist, the prince, used the female protagonist to help him find an antidote for Bai Lianhua, I thought the prince had true love for Bai Lianhua. After Bai Lianhua woke up, he distrusted the female protagonist and defended Bai Lianhua. Although it was forcefully explained that the male protagonist defended White Lotus in every possible way because Bai Lotus lied to the male protagonist and said that Bai Lotus saved the male protagonist's mother, did he use all kinds of distrust of the female protagonist for White Lotus? No matter how you look at it, the male protagonist has a preference for White Lotus. And at the end of the article, the heroine even forgives the hero. It really disgusts me. Is the heroine desperately lacking love? This kind of scumbag can be forgiven, and the second male lead in the novel is also excellent, so why do we have to forgive the male protagonist. I would rather the heroine die alone

Woohoo, it's so good. I feel like the writing style in the early stage is very good, but after Long Zhaohua appeared, has the heroine been dazzled by love? Some of the plots are quite illogical, but the subsequent plot is too good, and the heroine's life experience will definitely reveal a lot of stories.

The narrative is too bland and the plot has no emotion at all. It doesn't make people feel like they're actually there. I barely read more than forty chapters and gave up the book.

Whether a novel is good or not can be clearly understood from the beginning. When Lin Yunran traveled through time, it was either she or Lin Yunran. She was still the famous killer Yunran in her previous life. The process of a woman's inner struggle was shown layer by layer in a real, delicate and touching way. She carried Yunran's love for Ling Tianmo in her previous life, and she also has the love for Ling Tianmo in this life. The only drawback to Yunran's stubbornness is that Han Ziche at the beginning is not the male protagonist. Although he is also sinister, Long Zhaohua is very warm and sweet in the back, and he was also the same when he first appeared in the front. The resolution of this male protagonist did give me a headache at first. I always prefer to read newer novels and don't like to read the finished ones. That's how life is. The beauty of life is that sometimes we have fantasies and longings for it.

She can't solve any problem that can be solved with money hahaha what kind of fairy saying is this hahahahaha XSWL