The Unbeatable Skeleton Keeps Leveling Up with the Campus Belle

It's not too much to give yourself a good review, right?

The "strength" of the promise was born for Su Wanqing's "weakness". If you are afraid, I will stand in front of you. If you fall, I will lift you up. If you fall, I will tear open the abyss and pull you back! It's not a domineering CEO falling in love with me, nor a genius girl crying. These are two humble souls struggling in the quagmire of fate, supporting each other, growing up and entrusting each other. She needs his protection, and his strength is her courage. He needs her trust and her calling, she is the reason for his existence.

My heart can't bear to read it. The characters here, no matter the heroine, male protagonist or villain..., This book is suitable for young readers. Old bookworms should not read it and get angry. I will give it a good review in the end and it can be read as a refreshing article, but don't use your brain when reading it. Come on, the author.

Focus on emotional description

It's so embarrassing. This can even get a 9.5 Rating. It's so bad.

So-so, I think there is something wrong with the portrayal of the heroine. When her mother is hospitalized and her father is missing, she should be a strong and independent woman, not a weak little girl; and the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too abrupt, so every time the lyrical plot is played, she seems half-hearted and awkward. Then there is a problem with the world view. The guild leader is actually the strongest person in a city, and there is no one to check and balance him. If the official can't suppress him, wouldn't he be independent? It will seriously threaten the country's dominance, and this situation is unlikely to exist for a long time. There is also a problem with the IQ of the supporting characters. Everywhere they go, someone must appear. Even if you meet a dirty beggar in real life, you won't jeer. This kind of plot can be highlighted from the side description; also, the plot is too depressing, there is no relaxing plot, and it is long and complicated, and the progress is slow. The climax plot is always mixed with abrupt and embarrassing vernacular. In short: the plot of this book is bland and confusing and can only be filled with a lot of emotional descriptions. The author's poor writing style makes it awkward and abrupt, and it also slows down the advancement of the plot. Not recommended to read

I read Chapter 67 and can't stand it anymore. I would like to raise a few questions, and I hope the author can understand them. I personally like the overall setting and development of this book, but I will list its shortcomings: 1. The protagonist is a bit of a middle-class person, mainly reflected in his attitude towards the heroine. It is reasonable to suspect that he is a dead-end thorny ape (I am not looking down on him, I am the same) 2. The protagonist who lives a new life will not hide his clumsiness. He likes to show off his holiness in front of others without strength, and cannot weigh the importance. As a person who has experienced one life, he does not see the world and his own strength clearly, and he is a reckless man. 3. The murderous intention is too strong, and Damata will die at every turn. The red eyes will open and the giant sword will be drawn. 4. Generally speaking, existing systems are developed in a wretched manner and then slapped in the face, but the setting of this book does not suppress first and then expand. I even think that the protagonist will die in the next second because he is too arrogant and cannot distinguish between the big and small kings. 5. As a reference for the same world view, as there are so many C and D level people in a city, the local official strength is actually only C level. 6. The setting of the principal is too straightforward. As an old man, it must conform to the setting of this age. Although he was added for the purpose of breakthrough, it is too thin. Other buffs can be superimposed on this basis (such as: breaking through to increase life span, raising children, saving relatives, etc.). 7. In the Wail dungeon, the characterization of the characters and the story is a little unfamiliar. After finishing the defense, I came back to talk about the illusionist, and I started a new chapter directly. I thought I missed a chapter, so I went back to find out how Lin Yue (the illusionist) appeared. That's all I can recall right now. I haven't seen Chapter 68, but in Chapter 67, the protagonist wants to commit murder at night. Everyone knows that there is a conflict with each other, and it is based on the conflict during the day. And everyone knows that you are an intelligent and independent skeleton, but you are still thinking about the dark moon and the high night, thinking that no one can find out. So sorry, give up.

That's it. The title of the book obviously promises that Xu is the protagonist. However, the protagonist does not appear as many times as the second protagonist. Most of the time is spent describing what happened to the school beauty. There are also those emotional scenes that are very awkward. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, just write cool stories. Half of them are cool and half of them are embarrassing. People who watch them will be embarrassed to death.

What are you doing? What are you doing? This man can't help but kill people if he doesn't take the initiative. He has no brains.

The author's writing style is very good. I urge the author to update it as soon as possible so that it can become a masterpiece with a score of 9.8 As soon as possible.