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It's very interesting. I hope the author won't write about the intrigue between the families later. Just keep it sweet.

It's good-looking and sweet. It's not like other novels with the old routine of rebirth and system. It's worth reading. I suggest the author to update it quickly₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

This is probably the only novel on the entire Internet that has no rebirth, no system, and is so sweet that I feel like it. The writing style is unmatched by other authors. It's so beautiful, isn't it?

I think the first 100 chapters are very interesting, and there are relatively few online articles on this subject. I remember when I read this novel, it should only be about 120 chapters, and the score would be 9.8. How to put it now, the plot advances too slowly, and there are too many daily chapters. It's not that writing daily life is wrong. You write too much space for daily life and main tasks. In other words, it's a water word count. I feel like I'm still making gifts after reading dozens of chapters. For example, in the last ten chapters about Qian Ruan's relationship, your shopping content has too much irrelevant content. It can be abbreviated. Many people may refute that it is just for foreshadowing. Is that really the case? I feel that the author wants to express every minute, every second, and every moment in detail. This means that there is no focus. For example, if you are eating hot pot now, there is no need to write about who ordered the shrimp, how big the shrimp is, and how many people can eat it. Just write about eating shrimp. I don't know if book friends feel this way. These nearly 100 chapters are not as good as the previous 100 chapters. This may actually be the case as the rating has become 9.6. Of course, it only represents my own superficial thoughts and lacks in-depth consideration and understanding.

The author's writing is so good, I can't describe it. Anyway, it is the most beautiful romance novel I have ever read. From yesterday to today, I feel very comfortable. I have read each chapter word by word, and I can't bear to skip reading. It is really good. The author is slow to update because he wants to write a better quality. It is really well written. Everyone should read it.

This is one of the better books of its kind. There is nothing poisonous about it. There is no harem of people selling sheep over others, and there are no pretentious scenes. There are also many sub-CPs that can be praised😍Recommended In addition, the author must not be a eunuch (several serials that I have been following have been discontinued/unfinished)

First, I don't understand why you wrote about Qian Shuai, and it's really poisonous, especially what the heroine said, saying that he said it to others for the heroine, so you don't know why, don't you just like you, and you know Your boyfriend knows he likes you, but you say that he is nice in front of the hero. This is too green tea. I also know what the author is thinking. He wants to write a plot where enemies become friends, and the hero and heroine are magnanimous, perfect and rational, but this is very poisonous. Second, the dialogue between the male and female protagonists is too stiff and not sweet at all. Your boyfriend is jealous. If you ignore the one who praises you, you just stop and say that you don't like him. You just like the male protagonist. Why do you keep explaining so much? And it's the same for both parties. It's inexplicable that the male and female protagonists are moved. Third, author, please really listen to me. You can't understand group portraits. Group portraits are difficult. What's more, what you've written is too divided between male and female protagonists. Moreover, you've written so many supporting roles and you can't portray them. It's useless. You might as well write more male and female protagonists. Your first book is all about group portraits. You can't understand it. You're too ambitious, and this kind of novel is not suitable for group portraits. , What everyone wants to watch is the male and female protagonists, no one will care about the supporting characters, and your supporting characters cannot promote the plot, and you have written everything in detail. Omit the supporting characters when necessary, and write less about the irrelevant ones. You should focus on the male and female protagonists. It is okay if you intersperse a few chapters of supporting characters with a few words of the male and female protagonists, but you have written too many supporting characters, and it is difficult to distinguish the priorities. Finally, there are a lot of poisonous points. The male and female protagonists have been dating online for four years. The dialogue is too stiff, and your love words are really poorly written. I am baffled by the blushing and touching emotions of the male and female protagonists.

Quite sweet

What would you say if it's not the male protagonist? Do you think it's realistic for rich people to pretend to be poor? Even if they pretend to be poor, they won't be like this. This is another old routine and I can't stand it.

I have read more than 80 chapters so far and I feel it is too stiff. The description of the male and female protagonist's parents is quite poor. When the male protagonist falls in love, his parents do not check, and the male protagonist does not say anything to ask the two families to cooperate more. The female protagonist's parents are written as if they are selling their daughter for marriage, but they also look like they love their daughter. (In the part where the identity of the male protagonist cannot be found, it is obvious that the identity of the male protagonist is better than that of the female protagonist). The whole classic must be misunderstood and forced to make coincidences. In the plot between the roommate and Xiaoyue, the male protagonist put aside his hesitation and went to watch the movie. Please, can the protagonist be rich? Is there any need to hesitate until Xiao Zhuang appears? There is also the tutor in the back. If the author hadn't written rigidly, with the tutor's time, Xiaoyue and Xiaozhuang would have finished their wedding long ago.