A Small Soldier at the Border Gate

Like the Ming army

Take less women, it's become a stud novel, the male protagonist has too many women, it's okay in the early stage, but the more you read later, the more it looks like a novel

Natural and simple! Comfortable! ! Those boring, cookie-cutter template novels! ! Use a game metaphor! ! There are thousands of boring Xianxia games! Far less down-to-earth than Yan Yun Liu!

Just one comment, no need to say much about the level of 9.3, Haha.

The author has low academic qualifications and poor writing skills. The identity and name of the speaker are often not disclosed, and the speech is confusing. There is not even a dialogue, just like talking to oneself. Some paragraphs only have one word or word, which completely fails to meet the conditions of being divided into separate paragraphs, such as "and" and "if". How can this be separated into separate paragraphs? There is also a Chun Niang who calls herself a "slave". There are many more, there are errors everywhere and the sentences don't make sense.

Why do I let myself go more and more the more I write later?

I've read more than a dozen chapters, most of which are about doubting other people's thoughts. Are you tired? I'm so thoughtful.