Spring Tide of a Swapped Marriage

The plot and story are pretty good, but the early interactions between the male and female protagonists are full of bugs. The male protagonist pretended to be a chamberlain and cuddled with the female protagonist. The female protagonist felt that there was nothing wrong with her. She even let him stay on her bed, held her hands and carried her to the bed to sleep. He would half circle her, fully circle her and hold her. You still know how to be polite and dignified when you are with your male partner, but you accept it perfectly with the waiter? If the waiter is not a man, he can touch him casually? Quite ridiculous. Just watch it without thinking.

I only found a small part of it and found it quite interesting. I just felt that the second male lead was too arrogant. His cousin usually took care of everything in the house. Even the second female lead took care of bathing and dressing. After getting engaged to the heroine, he was drugged by the second female lead and even slept together. The second male lead did not have any love for the second female lead. He didn't pay attention to the guarding between men and women. He held the second girl on the horse and rode together. If the second girl twisted her leg, he would hug the second girl openly. Didn't he feel the second girl's love for her? This way of handling the relationship between men and women, who would not be estranged. Fortunately, he did not get together with the heroine.

It's quite good, but it's really a bit unfinished. Obviously so many people are looking for someone with the surname Qi, but they can't see the people around them. They insist on killing others. In fact, there is no need. Such a good uncle, ugh😮‍💨

It's hard to comment on the second male lead. He likes the female lead, and even though they were engaged, he still made love to his cousin in public, and ended up sleeping with her. Before he got married, he was hopeless. He doesn't look too shameless, I don't like him, I really don't like him

The first part was interesting and good, but the second part was so rushed and the ending was unfinished.

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The writing behind the plot is too sloppy.

The content is very novel, I will want to continue reading it

The writing training I have received since childhood is that the description of characters and events must serve a stable center. Even if the article is scattered in form, the spirit cannot be scattered. This story, to me, feels like a dream that someone had. The plot of the story is not very coherent. There is no necessary connection between the several main lines. The characters' personalities are displayed as they wish. Although the characters are not dry, they are also thin. The development of the whole story is a bit anticlimactic, and what happens in the next chapter is comparable to the content of all the previous chapters.

The ending couldn't be more hasty, it's a mess.