Everyone's Beast Island: Obtain the Only Behemoth Dragon at the Beginning

You just suppress it. The person in front was injured and he brought two hundred people with him. The protagonist just let them run away. The person behind brought five hundred people to pick up the leaks. The protagonist watched them pick up and said harsh words. The heroine was really very righteous. She had to live and die with the protagonist once they met. When the fight started, the protagonist let The heroine was watching a play there. After watching the play, she said that they had formed an alliance. The resources should be shared equally among the heroines. Even important resources should be shared equally. What do you think? There was no emotional foreshadowing at all. I just invited the protagonist three or four times and the protagonist finally agreed. The heroine will live and die with the protagonist. Will the meeting last for half a day? Speak more than ten sentences? Just inexplicable

It can only be said that there is no plot foreshadowing and the rhythm is too tight, but the author does not have that kind of great writing style, and it cannot be continued at all. It feels like an AI creation. But for now, the world view should be quite big. I hope the author can make the world view a little broader, and the early foreshadowing should also be involved, right? Guo Tu, Zhang Li and others, I know that the author wants to imitate those great masters to write a sense of despair, but the author cannot control it. There is no such depressive presence, it is completely straightforward to say that he is desperate. In the final analysis, his writing is too poor. If you can't get the rhythm dance going, it's useless. It is estimated that several hundred foreshadowings will be needed before they can be used. Then the author updates too slowly. I have an idea, but I don't have the space to do it.

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I deliberately watched it for 30 minutes before commenting. I won't say more, I understand everything.

I would like to call this novel the author's fantasy before he played ARK with mods, was killed by a wild boss, lost all his money, and passed out from anger.

The plot is okay, but the description ability is so poor and there are too many failures. I don't know where to start complaining about it. The alliance leader is the best, the heroine sticks to the pig's foot not because of profit but because of feelings, the pig's foot is divided into half for no reason, the double-chambered dragon skill is useless after being used once, etc., There are too many, I can't finish them.

It's just a bit ugly, and the rest is just to make up the word count.

Nice to hear

Can the author be faster with Xin?

What is it about? The main character has no brains, and the character description is not good either.