Junior Sister, She Is Both Fierce and Pretty

It's unfinished. There is a plot about seizing one's body in the middle that talks about encountering pitfalls in the mortal world that were not written or filled in. In the end, the ending except for the master and Shining was not written. It seems that the system has been forgotten in the back. The scenes of Miss Song and Xin'er as the heroine's good friends in the back are gone, and the senior brother and Hai Ling are too sloppy. . . There is no specific main line in the middle, which is practice, practice, practice. . . . At first, I thought the main plot was to find her brother, but the heroine felt that she didn't particularly want to find him at all. In the end, her brother became cannon fodder. There are also Xin'er's younger brother, Yun Jing, Miaomiao Immortal, the real and fake Qianjin Lin, and the star master of Zhaixing Pavilion. It is a pity that it would be good if the main plot was clear and the character details were perfect. But the characters of Shining, Starry Night, Master and the original male protagonist Yin Yue are very good. It can only be said that this book is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

This is a heart-warming novel about cultivating immortals. Every character is very vivid. The heroine is gentle, lovely, firm and sober, the master is cold and protective, the senior brother is as moist as jade, the second senior brother is unlucky and crazy, and the third senior brother goes to the house to reveal his tiles. I don't want to wait. Shining, who is looking forward to seeing each other again, the pure and kind person who obeys the stillness of his heart, and strives to transform into the starry night and never abandons her. There are also fellow teachers and friends such as Jie Wan, Yun Jing, Chu Yi, Min Min, Xin'er, Yin Yue, and Chan Yue, all of whom warm the heroine's journey forward.

After watching Ten Percent, I felt that the heroine was not very good... The supporting characters were originally from the protagonist's group, but for their own benefit, they drew their swords against each other. Then the heroine felt that you have hurt the people around me and you are a bad person. One is a traitor for his sister and joins the protagonist group, and the other lives in a family where interests come first and has no choice but to climb up the ladder. If you don't serve yourself, God will destroy you. If you write them in a bad and vicious way, I won't say it. If you write them as a last resort, I will definitely have a heart attack... The heroine feels that it is wrong for you not to stand by me. If you hurt the people around me, you will hurt me. It really makes Long Aotian feel like it. At the beginning, the heroine set the truth very well, decisive and wise, so when this happens later, I really can't stand it. Then I jumped to the finale. The villain is my brother who was kidnapped by the demon cultivator. This is normal, but what is even more unbearable is that the extra chapter confirms who the male protagonist is. It is indeed obvious from the beginning that the Buddhist son will have a lot of roles, and then the master wrote that he likes the female protagonist... I am really speechless!

I can't accept this ending. It looked pretty good at the beginning, but suddenly became indifferent towards everyone in the end, which is contrary to the topic of "natural sword body" discussed with Xuan Wei. The realm suddenly soars and ends suddenly. Does the author have anything urgent to do? At the end of the writing, there was nothing left. I said I was looking for my brother, but I couldn't find him anywhere. In the end, my brother died and he left a tear. Is this tear so precious? In the later period, the feelings for the master, senior brother, Xin'er, etc. Also disappeared at all, and the system didn't know where it went. After ascending, he didn't even recognize the master. Is Xuanwei a stepping stone? In such a situation where emotions are so indifferent, you still remember becoming a Taoist couple with Jingjing. Niu, co-authoring is not a forgetfulness. Others are not human beings. Only you and the heroine are human beings.

This is one of the most inexplicable novels about immortality that I have read. The day after Poria became a disciple, she meditated in the mountains and drew Qi into her body. Then she slapped others in the face in all kinds of ways. There are no words or phrases about cultivation, and her moves are just awesome. She can build a foundation just by thinking about it. There is no thunder and calamity in the foundation building, it is very smooth. After watching it for several hours, I don't know what kind of skills and moves the female protagonist has practiced. I feel very lonely.

Yi Fuling Vs Hidden cp Silence I think the first half of this novel is super good. The character of the heroine Poria, the preference of Shan Xingjie, the senior brother and the third senior brother, the master Xuanwei, the master of Suwen Peak Chan Yue, Yin Yue... And other elders, as well as Luo Xin'er and the eldest lady of the Song family are all written very vividly. Then the early plots were also well written, but the ending was really a bit outrageous. The master died inexplicably, and then ascended again inexplicably. Some of the characters that came out later were not written. What happened to the first grade of junior high school in the end, and some people in the sect did not explain it. The character design of Fuling in the later period is really different from that in the early stage. In the early stage, I really liked Baby Fuling. She has a clear and cute outlook on life. She has her own ideas and respects others. She values feelings and has her own principles... As a result, in the later stage, just because of the natural sword body, it was like being in love with someone ruthlessly. There was no response to other people's good things or bad things to others. It felt like a puppet! Super hateful! The first half is really good, but it would be best not to watch the second half!

It felt good at first, but after four years of seclusion, things changed. The heroine seemed to be the kind of person that everyone loved in ancient times. She was a male character and everyone liked her, and she became Mary Suwen. What is different from the concept of heroines is viciousness, which ruins even good heroines.

I insisted on reading more than 410 chapters, but I really couldn't hold on anymore. I felt that I failed to write the heroine several times. The more I read, the more I felt that the heroine was very strange and I didn't know what to say. Originally, the heroine was very tough at the beginning, but later on I felt that the heroine was a little unreasonable. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore

After watching half of it, I actually quite like the characters in it, but judging from everyone's comments, it seems... I don't know how to put it. I think the character creation is very good. I like characters like Ling Yu, Min Min, Poria, and Xin'er very much. The plot is also very good, but it seems to be unfinished... I don't dare to read it anymore.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 300. The heroine's character was completely ruined. She promised to help Xin'er take care of Xiao Jin, but then she threw Xiao Jin to Yun Jing and went to the library. Can't she bring the child in? He had to be left to someone with a grudge to take care of him. Yun Jing tried his best to protect his younger brother. The heroine even said bad words to Yun Jing. Moreover, the heroine grew up too slowly. In more than 300 chapters, her cultivation level was still based on foundation building. She was said to be a sword cultivator but she didn't even have a name for her moves. I don't know what the purpose of writing four spiritual roots is to highlight a little spiritual root. There are not many advantages. I help this and this all day long, but I have not made any progress in my cultivation. When I encounter problems, I rely solely on the senior brother and the halo of the heroine. Some plots are inexplicable. I said I would not go to the sea spirit, but I still went to find it. I also brought back Ji Bumeng, but in the end, I did not fill the hole. He also arranged some emotional lines for the third senior brother inexplicably, which is ugly! ! ! ! !