The Yandere Husband Is Very Doting

The author wrote about Li Huang and Xi Muqian, but stopped writing halfway through. Then I went to write Sang Sang and Duan Jingnian. The plot was confusing and the writing was not good. I would like to ask the author, now that Li Huang and Xi Muqian have finished writing, wouldn't you write a perfect ending for them? Wouldn't it be better if you wrote a new book about Sang Sang and Duan Jingnian? You wrote them together, and the plot is confusing. Another thing is that you named this book "Yandere". You have already chosen the title of the book. Why did you write Duan Jingnian? As an author, you must remember that when you were writing essays in junior high school or high school, your Chinese teacher would definitely say that you should echo the beginning and end of the essay, echoing the title, right? The homework is huge. I personally think that writing essays and novels should be similar. I really like the part you wrote about Li Huang and Xi Muqian, but because I saw you suddenly started writing about Sang Sang and Duan Jingnian, I decisively gave up reading because I was addicted to watching Huang and Qian, but you suddenly changed the characters, which made me feel very confused. I also want to see their follow-up. I hope you can take a good look at the words I wrote for you.

In fact, the relationship between Li Huang and Xi Muqian can be continued. They are obviously the male and female protagonists. Why did Duan Jingnian appear in the middle? It was really uncomfortable to stop suddenly when the movie was still full of meaning. But u1s1 Mu Qian and Li Huang are really super good. No extra considerations? That's the only thing that got a bad review. It was a pretty good novel. Alas... It was smashed.

Although one book tells the story of two people, overall both stories are very good, and I feel very nice!

It's really beautiful, I love it ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

The novel is very good!

This is also the first time I have encountered a protagonist change halfway through.

I only watched the part between the male and female protagonists. It was very interesting, sweet all the time, and there was no amnesia. It happened a few years ago, but the birth of the first pair of children was a little different. The sperm and eggs were removed and artificially conceived by another person. The male and female protagonists didn't know until the child was 5 years old! I personally think that I should write another book about the last couple. This couple never appeared in the story of the male and female protagonists. Suddenly, such a pair appears. It feels weird, I have no desire to read it, and it is a bit sadistic! 1

Substitution for what? !

Where does it end?

Why is it weird that a different person wrote it... The previous ending was obviously very sloppy.