Feng Yun Long Son-In-Law

He always repeats the plot of a hero saving a beauty, and he is indecisive when dealing with the women around him. In order for him to save the world, two strong men forced him to have a relationship with the dragon girl and get pregnant. Is this okay? When I return to the heroine, I am afraid that she will leave and choose to hide it. What will happen to the children in the future? Shouldn't we be responsible? Since the heroine does not accept betrayal, it is not good to give up her position to others. You can open a harem if you want. Please let her leave quickly and avoid getting hurt. She doesn't have any role now anyway. It is important not to write about her accepting the harem. Leave in a cool way.

What a pity for Nangong Wan'er. Hey, that Wang Lingying felt disgusted when he saw her. What the hell! Until I saw that Nangong Wan'er had no chance, I immediately vomited. What was written? It was so entertaining. Change it👎👎👎

It started out really well, but why did the author make it crooked halfway through? Isn't it good to go step by step? Isn't it bad that the way of heaven is not Wang Lingying but someone else? The world is full of loving couples, so why would you think of letting a couple fight? Why! What's more, the apprentice is in turn stronger than the master. It's like drinking water. If you want to break through, you can break through. So what does the protagonist do?

It started out really well. I wonder if it was because the author was trying to make up the word count? Or there are other reasons. He has always been a male protagonist who pretends to be sexy, or he is involved in all kinds of ambiguous and childish plots. I guess many children like to watch this kind of thing...

The plot is exciting and the writing is good. It's a bit of a pity that I was just passing by.

The quality of the content is too poor, especially the main character Du Qingchen is a scumbag, 1st color, 2nd incompetent, he is an ancestor first and then a grandson, he shows off his skills everywhere, he is also ignorant and has no sense of justice. I suggest you recommend less such books in the future (Du Qingchen is too scumbag and too perverted)

Personally, I feel that Xiaoyu's writing is pretty good. Maybe everyone has their own opinions. I'm personally more optimistic about it. Those who say it's too exaggerated, I don't think so. Everyone has a heroic dream. I think this kind of plot is consistent. If you think it's wrong, don't criticize it.

This work should not be continued. It is really contrary to the spirit of literary works. The plot is confusing and sends an unhealthy signal to readers: This society is completely finished.

It's a lot of mess. The content in the book is originally modern. Why does monogamy mean nothing to the male protagonist? Doesn't the Marriage Law exist in the book? And in the secret realm, why are there modern electrical appliances and cars? What nonsense?

It doesn't matter if the stories are similar, it doesn't matter if the story is entertaining, the key is to make readers unhappy! Such a heroine makes people mad. The male protagonist loves her so much that he loves her so much that he keeps licking the pretentious woman who has no merit.