Back to 1958, I Have a Department Store

There are many people writing about this type of thing, but few are really good at writing. If you haven't researched this period of history, it's best not to write about it, otherwise it will look like there are loopholes everywhere. The diaphragm should be very good, 1. The original owner starved to death? I have a bicycle at home that I can sell. Buyer jobs are also for sale. 2. You don't know about rural areas. Wheat fields basically don't need much water. Wheat is grown on the mountains. 3. There are many things that can only be written in one sentence. In fact, there is a lot that can be written. For example, when you officially go to work, you need to bring a letter of introduction, proof of identity, and indicators to get a work permit. 4. Even if there are 8,000 kilograms of sweet potatoes in the factory, the workers will not faint from hunger. In fact, there was enough food in 1958. If there was no food in the next three years, there would be no way to exchange 8,000 for 200. If anyone really did that, they would probably be slapped with a black gun. 5. Can your bullock cart really pull 2,000 grains? There were no cement roads at that time. The other characters have no personalities or emotions, so I won't talk about those. In fact, book friends don't have high requirements for novels. The plot is basically logical, the characters have certain personalities, and the story is just a little good!

The front and back don't match. The original owner's father ran away with the widow and left no money or food, so the male protagonist traveled through time and lived with the original owner who died of starvation. Later, he said that his father left 1,000 yuan to contribute to the country and conceal his identity.

It started out well, but then things started to get complicated. I could write a few chapters about everything as big as sesame seeds.

At the beginning, it is written that the biological father swept away everyone in the family and ran away with the widow, leaving not a morsel of rice, starving the original body to death, so that the protagonist could travel through time and become possessed. Later, it was rewritten that my father secretly went to the northwest to engage in scientific research and kept 1,000 yuan. The main plot is contradictory. The protagonist must starve to death before the original body can cross over; if the supplies are left behind, the original body will not starve to death, and the protagonist will have nothing to do. Moreover, " " is used very outrageously. Every time I describe my inner thoughts in modern times, I use them as if I were telling others. It's painful to read. Not good.

It is a nonsensical and funny style. Many things appear out of the blue, and the main character has nothing to do with it. This is not in line with the era. It can only be said to be the author's self-interested article. You can do whatever you want.

I can't stand it anymore, bye bye

It's okay at first, but then it's just so-so.

There is no water in the whole village. Reservoir construction starts in summer, and there are fish in winter... Do you think this is normal thinking?

The writing was okay at first, but then it became too watery, and the more I read, the more I couldn't read it. I regret giving him a good review, I should have given him a negative review. Abandon books

This book is very beautiful and fully reflects the great contributions made by people of that era to make life better today.