Snow Wolf King: the Two Babies Picked up at the Beginning Are Actually the Reincarnation of the Empress?

I've read Chapter 18 and can't stand it anymore. The descriptions in some places are a bit witty and embarrassing. For example: I didn't go out of the virgin forest at the beginning, and then cooked Chinese medicine 666 in the primitive forest. If you want to say that you brewed herbal medicine, I won't say anything. -It's better to change it to a shock system. There are far more shock descriptions than entry descriptions. -Also, the two empresses are a bit naive, and one is a little bit stupid. Anyway, no matter what the protagonist does, the empress will be shocked.

It's a warm read, a bit slow, but these two girls are the reincarnation of the empress, but the dialogue is a bit unlike the reincarnation of the empress, it's a bit silly and sweet.

It's just the two empresses' intelligence thing. It's uncomfortable to watch. The Wolf King and the Wolf Pack are both very good. I hope the IQs of the two empresses will be improved in the future. Look my eyes. Do you hear me?

The writing is really beautiful! The plot is also compact Hahaha, the writing style is really immature, there are a lot of repetitive sentences appearing in large numbers, and the Empress Demon Lord has not experienced warmth for a long time. Kazuma is like a relative. It's okay to write this once or twice, but it's really annoying to read too much. It's the same number of words as Shui. It's a good setting. I would also like to improve the battle scenes. Strong enemies are killed in a daze. There are some missing battle scenes. I always feel that the opponents killed by the protagonist do not match his improved strength. It's nothing, that's it, come on, get better and better

The two empresses didn't show their brains throughout the entire process.

Either the Empress was stunned, or the Demon Lord was stunned, it was all water-text! ! !

To be honest, the writing was okay, but the way the two kids forcibly reduced their wits to highlight the protagonist was handled very poorly. Once or twice, forget about it. Basically, every time the protagonist becomes more powerful, he would do it once, so that's fine. The most important thing is that the content of each wisdom drop is quite different.

Every time, the baby says that there is no wolf dad in "Spiritual Chronicles", a powerful enemy appears, the wolf daddy is in danger and is about to die, and then says that their rebirth destiny has begun to change. When the next enemy appears, they say that there is no wolf daddy in "Spiritual Chronicles", and the wolf daddy is about to die. This writing is inconsistent, okay, there is no logic at all, your plot is very good, I can say this 👍🏻, but the logic is 💩

It's not as good as AI ghostwriting. The character setting can lower the intelligence. Even the author has been making mistakes in setting the character's level. I can understand wanting to express the dark side of human nature, but don't write the character's mind like a kindergarten student. The plot develops all the way, and many of the later settings don't match up with the previous settings. The number of words is just water.

If it weren't for those two empresses, it would still be a pretty good novel. I don't understand why it was necessary to add those two. I can only say that it's not ugly, nor is it good-looking, it's just ugly.