The Splendor of the Mystic Maiden

I see that many students are asking about the male protagonist. In fact, in the outline, the male protagonist is actually the heroine's brother. There is no one else, and there may not be a male protagonist until the end of the book. How can I put it, the male protagonist is the kind who will not have children with the heroine, it is just a spiritual one. My current plan is like this. If you have any suggestions, please leave a message below. I will read it regularly (I read it every day! Hahaha. Finally, thank you for your support!)

It's so beautiful, but updates are a bit slow.

Come on! Good-looking and good-looking✨

So far, I really like it and will continue to follow it, but there are some details that make me laugh or cry a bit. I am currently reading Chapter 33. Two people walked together and walked 70 miles in 10 days, and they said it was not easy... In fact, they only walked 7 miles a day, which is 3.5 Kilometers. Normal people can walk without walking fast in an hour, and running can take less than half an hour. And their main thing every day is to rush, so they only walk that little? 🤣🤣 Logically speaking, if they have a certain level of cultivation and are in a hurry, walking 100 miles a day is not an exaggeration 😂

Why didn't the heroine give her alchemy master a life-enhancing pill, and her adoptive mother didn't even look at it, but she gave the person who harmed her a life-enhancing pill? This kind of hypocrisy is so disgusting.

In the comment section, don't ask if there is a male protagonist or anything. If you want to read a book with a male protagonist, go read other books! Great author! I support you, come on!

It's really a fun story, the heroine is really cheating, it's always fun, it's always fun, but where is the male protagonist? Why is there never a male protagonist? Is there really no male protagonist in this book? Can anyone who has read it please reply to me?

After reading your book, I realized that women's writing pays more attention to the details of the process, but lacks the fighting process and some exciting climaxes as well as attractive outdoor scenes. It is still too soft, but the writing is good. Good works will only be better if the rigidity of the soft belt is there. (The excitement of the climax refers to the various details during the fight and survival in the dangerous environment. The exterior scenes are written about the weather, characters, and characteristics during the fight)

First of all, I would like to give you a good review. The author is great. Can you change the heroine's soliloquy? It's a bit strange and awkward, especially the sentence "murmured" appears in many chapters.

Emmm... I just started reading this book. I think Mo Yu is too precocious if he is less than ten years old. It would be much better if he changed it to about 14 or 15 years old.