Made-Up Martial Arts, Have You Really Mastered Them, Disciple?

It's incredible, it's incredible, the author's imagination is really big. Not only did he write an alternative groundbreaking book, he also wrote an alternative list of gods. It's a pity that this book should be as popular as any other, but why isn't it popular?? Maybe the title is bad?

The protagonist cheats and dares to teach, the apprentice dares to learn from his brains, the master and apprentice complement each other, the realm setting is very good, the plot is too monotonous, the battle of constantly crushing the opponent is too bland, the daily description is like writing a diary, and some plots are forced to be funny and feel very intellectual.

I would like to ask the author, is this feedback you designed useful? It seems that no feedback has any impact. The protagonist doesn't need it anyway. All the fights are basically done by the apprentice, and they are basically crushed. Isn't it superfluous for the master to require this hundredfold feedback? This so-called protagonist just sits there drinking tea from the beginning to the end. He doesn't even have time to stand up, and he doesn't know the meaning of his existence.

Incredible. Middle school student writing? I won't say any more. Otherwise you will get sprayed.

The creativity of this book is okay. The main problem is that there are self-created exercises. There are too many pages about the apprentice's practice, which makes the readers sleepy. The novel is about the plot. It has more than a hundred chapters and is still talking about how the apprentice practices. The main story didn't advance much.

The plot is like an infinite matryoshka doll. All the B-blocks of the realm created later have been dropped, and it is basically the same as the ordinary realm. Then there is a lot of nonsense. I have to say one sentence about ten times in three chapters!

This apprentice is so unbelievable, even more powerful than cheating. He can create techniques at random, and he can create a cultivation path just by giving him an idea. This is even more exaggerated than having a system.

Generally speaking, it is a good movie. The writing and sentences are very smooth. There are moderate levels of sermons, pretentiousness, and semi-backstage. The novels do not make people feel aggrieved, nor do they pretend to be artificial. The secondary characters in the plot are not stupid, and there are only 1-2 occasionally. Another best thing is that there is no explanation of the source of Goldfinger. Many novels insist on adding a source for Goldfinger, but they can't write it well and end up being forced to quit. Therefore, this novel "Goldfinger" is just a goldfinger. The only thing lacking is that the routines when connecting the maps are a bit similar. People with slow reading speed will feel that every time they want to open the next map, it will be gradually revealed from the top, which will make people tired. This kind of situation can only forget the routine after a while while reading. People who read quickly can just swipe right to skim.

It can pass the time, okay?

Nice