Newlywed Wife Is a Bit Sweet

There are a lot of typos. The content is well organized and very suitable for reading. The male protagonist in it is a bit pretentious, I suggest you change it, but I just suggest 🌈I love the heroine very much, her character is simply great. 👏Then I think the male lead still has the halo of being the protagonist and should appear in more scenes, because I think the second male lead appears in more scenes. The plot is still very online, a bit sadistic and mixed with the sour smell of love. 🤣

The male protagonist in the story looks like a mentally disabled man who doesn't trust his wife yet, so why would he marry her?

How many people wrote this together? It's inconsistent. Didn't the people who wrote later read the previous content? The heroine in the front was pretty good before she got divorced, but the heroine in the back is particularly rubbish. She can't connect with the previous one, and she's also a chatterbox. She always has SB-style dialogues with no plot.

I want to get the male and female protagonists back together as soon as possible♥😀

Love it, love it

I feel a little dizzy

It's okay to write, but there are too many typos

I sent it before I finished writing it.

Love it so much

The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant.