Doomsday Game: Trapped in Negative States, I Was Saved by a Cute Girl

No harm

Nice🙈It's so beautiful, I want to cry! ! ! I was moved by this wave of friendship in team games to defend against enemies! The idea of ​​negative status is also very good, and it is diversified; it is not so brainless, and the plot is constantly escalating, which is very game-like! The author must love to play😝😝😝

The details of the game are quite good, but the writing (especially the dialogue part) is too childish, so that in many cases the narrative rhythm of the battle is disrupted in order to describe the mechanics clearly. There is a feeling that "the author is really trying to teach me (the reader) how to fight the BOSS". It is better to use narration or rapid mental activity perspective for large sections of analysis during the battle, rather than asking team members to speak a large section verbally. As for the small charge in the middle of the battle, a large section is also spoken to boost morale. It can make people laugh. Why is the charge rhythm so stupid? It is a joke to me. Alas, in general, good mechanical settings are wasted by long and trivial narratives.

Nice!

Players will not be resurrected if they die. They can only go back after clearing the level. If they don't clear the level, they will all die. Are you going to divide me into camps? Do you know why the rating is only 8.4? Because the characters in it are all brainless. Also, he doesn't even have the right to be called a player after being resurrected.

Invincible, I feel like I haven't graduated from high school. What I write is gibberish and extremely childish.

I hope we don't create a three-person team

Ended suddenly? ? . . .