The Goddess's Crazy Son-In-Law Comes to Her Door

Let me point out some of the most important errors in this book. 1The style of the book is unclear. First of all, we start with the title, which is roughly classified into urban life. However, as the plot develops, it begins with modern martial arts, then cultivating immortals, then leading troops to fight, and then cultivating immortals. There is no clear style, making the article messy and disorganized. 2. The content before and after the article does not match. Let's take Master Chen Hua and Li Xuancheng as an example here. I have read more than 1,300 chapters so far. In the previous Earth, you said that Master Li Xuancheng could kill an Anjin master with a peanut. Let's increase it to three levels, but it is not in the divine realm. Let's take Han Xiancheng as an example. He is in the divine realm, so let's let Li Xuancheng be in the heavenly realm and compete with the six gates. But we must know that the divine realm is no more than a martial master, that is, a foundation-building monk. The so-called heavenly state is nothing more than innate and acquired (I know this is different from what is written in the article, I will explain it later), then overcoming the tribulation is innate thunder. But later, Chen Hua said that Li Xuancheng deceived him because of the Jindan Lei Jie, which was inconsistent with the truth. When it comes to the True Immortal in the back, if the identities of the front and back are not taken care of, even if he develops, Li Xuancheng will not be that powerful. How can he go from Golden elixir to True Immortal in more than ten years? There are many others too. 3. There is a problem with common sense. First of all, the level of cultivating immortals is not consistent. Let's first talk about somewhere in more than a thousand chapters in the book. He said that after transforming into a god, there is union, return to ruins, and tribulation. Here I would like to raise a question. Since Hedao is an immortal, he must have passed through the tribulation. Because only after overcoming the tribulation can one become an immortal. Let's compare Hedao to an Earth Immortal, because Li Xuancheng is a loose immortal, so it's not a big problem to replace him with an Earth Immortal. So after transforming into a god, one should return to ruins, and after transcending tribulations, one should join the path. There are still many mistakes that I have not pointed out one by one. 4There are too many typos. Some typos really affect reading. For example, after more than a thousand chapters, it was written about the Holy Realm, the Demonic Realm, etc., But I accidentally saw the Immortal Realm and even the Temple later. Anyone who has read the previous article knows that the temple is on the same level as Kunlun Ruins, but it appears again in the following article. 5 The content is not relevant. The title is about madness, so looking at the whole book, I think there are very few chapters about madness. Most of them are about being abused and then catching up, and so on, which does not reflect madness at all. First get hit, then hit back, and so on. And based on this logic, I think I can continue to compile it later, because there are gods, celestial beings, golden immortals, etc., Which must be more powerful than the holy realm. If this continues, I feel that this novel has tens of millions of words, but the content is flashy and unrealistic. The above are my opinions, I hope the author will adopt them. This novel has been written for so long, so it may not be possible to revise it. I hope the author will not follow this logic when publishing new works. Sometimes, the plot can really move people, I have to say this. However, the flaws are too exposed and need to be corrected.

Chen Hua's life is never-ending. There is no way to end this book. According to the current routine, it can be continued one after another.

I saw the latest updated chapter. I hope the author takes a good look at it. Is the purpose of writing this book to abuse the female protagonist? If every plot development is driven by the heroine's fault, it will really lose a lot of meaning. And the most important point is that the heroine Yang Zixi is forced and threatened by so many villains in this book, even to the point where similar plots appear repeatedly. While readers feel aesthetic fatigue, they also feel that this method of promoting plot development is too low-level! So, to sum up, I think the current way the plot develops is seriously out of touch with the core idea of ​​the book! Even the article is not on topic and the logic is difficult to be consistent! I hope the author will think clearly. If it is really about torturing a female protagonist, I have nothing to say, thank you!

I really can't stand it anymore. I really admire the author's IQ. The protagonist is written to be worse than trash. He has a lot of skills but is targeted everywhere. He swallows his anger. The enemies are getting more and more. He doesn't know how to assassinate? And that despicable guy like Yang Zhiyuan won't survive more than two episodes. Isn't he just going to assassinate him, and then come to visit his crazy son-in-law? Where does this madness come from? Like impotence

I'm speechless. This protagonist is really a loser. He was bullied by his mother-in-law and still endures it. Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. It's really frustrating to watch any plot involving the mother-in-law, but that doesn't rule out other writings that are really good.

When you buy cigarettes, you will know that this is another author who has never seen the world.

The author's writing is too vivid, but the update is slow. It would be better if it were updated faster. 😀️

Chen Hua: I win this big game!

There is something wrong with the author's thinking! After reading the first 71 chapters, I don't want to read anymore! He is simply a dog-licking male protagonist. His boyfriend is so rich and powerful that he licks the female protagonist. My mother-in-law scolds her every day and molests her father-in-law. What a fucking piece of shit! In the early stage, the male protagonist was suddenly told that he would inherit a family fortune worth trillions, and later on, you still wrote about it! Where are the main lines, bright lines, hidden lines, and auxiliary lines of the novel? Plot? Wait, none. I really don't know what kind of madness you are talking about? A son-in-law, how did he become a son-in-law? It's just that the heroine buys some clothes and licks them like this... I suggest you read this novel by Lin Yang Su Yan and see what others have written and learn from it. What he wrote is that the heroine gave a steamed bun to the hero when he was a child, and the hero also licked the heroine's family, but in the end the hero will change. The writing is full of flesh and blood, with a soul, themes, ideas, and many lines... It's worth taking a look and seeing how other people's thinking diverges. Otherwise, you won't be able to write. Unless you directly start the plot of breeding, harem, and cultivation in the back! If that's the case, it's better not to write it. In the past few years, there have been too many novels about sons-in-law, and the plots are all the same. They are bloody, the male protagonist licks the dog, and few of them have flesh and blood and soul. Why! Book shortage... Internet novels in recent years have lost their souls

The fate of mother and daughter Yang Ziqi, Yang Zhiyuan, and Han Ziping went back and forth. Can it be less verbose? Junk works