The First Military Soldier of the Wei Dynasty

It's well written and the story is exciting. However, there are also flaws. The military combat method is simple. It is basically a straight-forward fight. There are no ingenious strategies. There is no description of the protagonist's advantages as a time traveler, such as the use of advanced weapons. There is a bit of personal heroism. Basically, the writing is that the protagonist is very awesome.

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Looks good, but too slow

In fact, the writing is okay. But the funnier thing is that the author may be a little forgetful. It was mentioned at the beginning that the protagonist is a time traveler, and then it was forgotten. This matter was not mentioned throughout the article, and the author was said to be illiterate. Finally, when we were about to attack the city, I suddenly remembered and told the protagonist that he had the gunpowder formula and made a cannon. Hahahahahaha, so funny

I don't know what to write about

What I wrote before is not bad. Decision-making with force is not bad, but when I go to Youdu, I really don't know what I want to do? After walking around for a while, I went back, but there was no effective news, other than turning around a school captain? If you don't hurry up and strengthen the defense, fortify the city, etc., Why don't you just sit outside and waste time for a month?

I really want to give it a bad review (it's not good enough), and give it a good review because I hope it won't update a few chapters.

Nice

Very good, come on

He has some brains. Each person who surrenders will be given 500 silver. Hundreds of people can be thought of. He also said that there is no money. One person can kill hundreds of people.