The Invincible Immortal Son-in-Law

I wonder if the first and last paragraphs were written by the same person?

Oh, I got carried away by playing with Miyamoto 😂 (Funny possession)

The early stage is interesting, the middle stage is laggy, the late stage is rubbish, and the ending is shit.

It's so hard to see the ending of a fantasy immortality novel with a single heroine. Although the middle female character is always there, it's really good to read. I was looking forward to the new book but it's gone… I could have written a thousand chapters after I left the earth, but I didn't… Anyway, it's good to read!

I don't know why you made the protagonist look so rubbish. He didn't take action even though he knew he was an enemy. He had to wait until his parents and his own woman were tortured before he could take action? Also, write a story where the heroine has to endure the humiliation that others have written about her family being destroyed, and then the hero comes out. Do you think writing like this can get extra points? No, it's just disgusting

I understand, this father-in-law is from the atmosphere team

I don't understand. I'm afraid that the money will be lost when I deposit it in the bank. You have to withdraw all the money from the bank every time. If the protagonist makes hundreds of millions of money in the future, he will not have to drive a truck and drag it around every day. Is the protagonist stupid or the author stupid?

The protagonist is still useless after rebirth

I don't understand why the male protagonist can't give the female protagonist her own company to run, instead of having to suffer the consequences of the family.

The first part is more fascinating, but the main character in the middle is so useless that I can't stand it.