The Full Moon over the West Mountain

The name and cover are very attractive, not traditional mindless writing.

The writing is solid and the plot is fascinating ~ good to watch ~

Author, are you writing a novel? Why does it feel a bit like prose? The explanations are too detailed, a bit verbose, like an old lady's foot bindings. I always feel like I am filling the word count, and the style is a bit bloated. It is a bit like an article read by elementary school students. It can be written concisely and clearly. It is not necessary to be so detailed. It is like a running account. For example, what did I do this morning, what did I do in the morning, what did I do at noon, what did I do in the afternoon, what did I do in the evening, what is the point? The chapters are also divided into one, two, three, top, middle and bottom. It's so tiring to read.

This is the most interesting novel, and it feels very Jianghu-like.

There is no distinction between priority and secondary. The self-righteous things written are too complicated and depressing. I have been reading books for 40 years and I don't see them very often😓

This book is too long-winded, always saying meaningless things, and the author is completely in a state of self-pleasure. There are at least two million words of nonsense in the over three million words.