The Husband's Family Eavesdropped on His Heart, and the Concubine Became a Group Favorite

A 🈶powerful and prestigious government official had nothing to do with a poor scholar.

I thought it would be fun to watch at first, but the more I watched, the more unhappy I became ^^; First of all, the heroine's existence is just to play a cheat for the hero. The two of them don't feel familiar with each other. There are only a handful of 1v1 interactions in terms of emotional development, but everyone in the house says that the two of them have a good relationship? Teacher author, if the relationship between the male and female protagonists is good, don't just show it to people in the house in private. The emotional development and interaction should be written for readers to see. This is a romance novel after all. Secondly, the evidence that "the female protagonist is a plug-in prop for the male protagonist" is that the female protagonist thinks a lot in her heart every time, and then the male protagonist's family extracts key information to solve the incident. The female protagonist does not even "take action to solve the problem". The female protagonist has truly solved 0 incidents by herself, which is gratifying. The heroine's thinking is not ordinary. She writes a long paragraph every time she expresses her thoughts. It's really tiring to read, and every time she can think of other things from this incident. Then the male protagonist gets prompts → the male protagonist solves the incident again, and the cycle goes like this. In addition, this article feels like you have written a routine and used it all the time. Let's talk about the difference between the two times when the heroine was jealous. What is the difference between the two times of fighting back and copying and pasting? If the female protagonist is rewritten as a Pokemon, this article will not change at all. Anyway, the author just needs something to tease the male protagonist. Maybe the elf can interact more with the male protagonist than the female protagonist^^

The heroine seems to have no mouth. . . When I was chased back to my parents' house, I could scream for help, but I only cried for help in my heart! That sister-in-law is so stupid. . . .

Yes, it's wonderful to listen to your heart.

I flipped through it and found it was just an outline article. How did it get such a high score?

That sister-in-law is so stupid that it makes people doubt her life (∩ᄑ_ᄑ)⊃ Seeing her look like that, I really laughed out loud and wanted to get into a book (#｀д´)ﾉ and shake her awake. I couldn't help complaining: Why do you have such a short memory (`へ´*)ノ? Do you really think that danger is like playing house, allowing her to experience it as she pleases again and again (.-`ω´-)? This sister-in-law's mindless behavior is like a piece of mouse droppings(;*´Д`)ノ The further I look back |•ω•`), the more frustrated I feel. What a wonderful (.•ω•)σ)´Д`) Book

The spoiler article (mind reading) looks so cool!

It feels a bit like mindlessly watching dramas

I originally read Chapter 20 and thought it was pretty good; but it was a bit ridiculous to say that the Duke's mother was dead and he didn't notice, and later his wife died without being noticed.

So-so, there are emotional lines but not concentrated or prominent. The so-called heroine feels like a prompt machine. After the prompt, there is no chance to appear or say anything. The male protagonist is just an executor. The topic is bland and boring. The whole article has no ups and downs. It is a flowing composition. I don't recommend reading it in the book shortage. 😟