Sword of Coming: From the Start in Lizhu Cave Heaven, Fortune Awaits Everywhere!

I'm really speechless. Qi Jingchun died and Lu Shen didn't help. You begged Lu Chen to save Qi Jingchun? After practicing boxing for two days, you dare to take the backlash of heaven for Qi Jingchun? Don't be disgusting if you can't write a book. Just to copy the original work reasonably, I was forced to be a martial artist.

At present, it seems that although the writing style is not as interesting as the General Manager, as a derivative fan work, it is quite restored in the portrayal of the original characters and the promotion of the plot (of course, there are some plot changes due to the protagonist that were made to fill up the regrets of the original), so it is considered qualified as a normal sword-based derivative novel.

The first part is okay, but the more you write later, the more boring it gets. We read fanfics just for fun. You don't even need to use your brain to write the next part. You can just change the name to the original and it's almost the same. Reading the later part is no different from reading the original work again.

First of all, other opportunities are taken at will, but even the only opportunity is taken, and the character's will is forcibly twisted to take it. Secondly, even if you copy and reward the martial arts and immortal techniques of other worlds, and then combine them with the ones here to deduce your own way, it will be fine. You can grab everything according to Chen Ping'an's instructions. I think people's lives are not hard enough. Most readers come to see a righteous and free-spirited character who occasionally helps Chen Pingan teach despicable and hateful characters. They do not come to see you pretending to be a brother while stealing opportunities from your brothers. Moreover, this is the only opportunity. If there is no system, how can you write to compare with Chen Pingan? The hardship is not as hard as others, the mental toughness is not there, the sense of justice is not there, and there is nothing.

This one is also okay. The other one is about Ning Yao doing a big show or a small one. They are both pretty good. My personal opinion is different. I like this type.

It is recommended that you don't change the name, just copy it to save trouble.

It feels no different from the original one. I changed the positions of the protagonist and Chen Pingan, and added a few things.

Fenghuo's novels are written at a slow pace, so why don't you write a fan novel? It only takes a hundred chapters to break through the second level. How about playing?

To be honest, there is almost no difference from the original work, except that the protagonist has been changed and an additional system has been added. This is not as good as the original work. The only good thing is that Qi Jingchun is not dead.

It's a bit messy to tell who is who. I copied and pasted a few paragraphs without changing their names?