After Guarding the Waste Alchemy Room for Three Years, I Secretly Became an Immortal.

After reading 140,000 words, I don't think there is anything serious about it so far. As for the heroine, I suggest that Yun Rong be arranged. I feel that this person is not bad. She is a must-have wife when traveling and staying at home. However, my personal suggestion is not to have a heroine. After all, the protagonist has secrets and upgrades quickly. It is not good to arrange a dragster. After all, the small goal has not been achieved yet. Also, the description of the female villain is not dark enough. If you want to write the protagonist who has the dark points, you should slap her hard in the face and beat her to death. Don't write the protagonist as too holy. If you have evil points, you must repay kindness and revenge. Don't tolerate being slapped in the face again and again. Don't give preferential treatment to women.

The only one is that you can turn useless elixirs into good elixirs. The writing is very interesting, and the pig's feet are not the Holy Mother. It's just that the fiancée's family is so disgusting

I voted for you with all my votes. Update it soon.

Although it is short, it is exciting! I listened to the end all the way, which is rare in my listening career.

It feels too bland and cliched, the protagonist has no moral character at all, and seizing treasures and killing people is like child's play. There is no flash point.

The male protagonist's character collapsed and he was just a little gangster, irresponsible, taking advantage, vain and showing off. The improvement speed of taking medicine is too low. With such a weak foundation, you still beat others by leapfrogging? It's better not to be beaten down by others. The plot is confusing, haha.

My favorite book, I love to read it, I want to love it

A divorce letter brings out a series of plots. If you tear it up early, no one will harm you. Can't you develop normally?

Very nice, please update soon I have been reading and listening to books for more than ten years, this is my second review It's my first time to dominate, this time it's this time, it feels good

When did you kill your fiancée's family and block the way, and the hatred is irreconcilable, but you are playing house across the street, trying to write a smile and let go of the grudge?