Ascetic Officer: Lost Control After Meeting a Charming Beauty

A bunch of messy things that the hero and heroine can't handle, a lot of unfinished business left behind, a bunch of unexplainable messy stuff

The stupidest time-travel heroine

The ending was too hasty. I actually wanted to see their subsequent lives and what the modern Shen family is like. Did they go back in the end?

The heroine is so stupid, it's hard to watch

The introduction says that the heroine was a high school teacher before time travel, but if you actually read the book, you will find that the heroine described in the article appears to be a high school student, and she is a freshman in high school, so she cannot be any older. No matter how much the author gives credit to the heroine, he still can't hide the heroine's brainlessness and naivety. Ordinary people can be written in the same way as ordinary people, but the IQ and experience that the characters should have at their normal age cannot be written down. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not well written. They forcefully create misunderstandings. The female protagonist has been attracted to her since chapter 100, but she imagined a white moonlight for the male protagonist. The misunderstanding continued until chapter 250 when she realized that she was imagining the male protagonist's sister. Could it be more ridiculous? Is this insulting the heroine's intelligence or looking down on the reader's intelligence? Well! The heroine was too weak, the writing was not strong, and although the male protagonist was very sexy, he couldn't make me want to run away.

It's well written and I felt very comfortable after reading it.