Source Force Overload

This novel has just started. Let me briefly talk about my current reading experience. Generally speaking, it is quite satisfactory (passing time is considered acceptable), with advantages and disadvantages. The following content mainly talks about shortcomings. If readers can accept it, the novel can be read. First of all, the character creation is slightly flat, and the characters are not three-dimensional and realistic enough, making it difficult for readers to have deep emotional resonance. Secondly, most of the supporting characters are functional existences that revolve around the growth of the protagonist and the development of the plot. The generals of the three countries seemed to be simply inserted into the story to promote the plot, rather than being vividly integrated into the story. Furthermore, there are certain logical flaws: in the war plot, the Montauk Kingdom was obviously at a disadvantage in terms of strength and resources in the early stage. In the process of the protagonist leading the army to reverse the war situation, some decisions and the reasons for the victory of the battle were not fully explained, and there were jumps in the plot, giving people a feeling of forcibly pushing the plot to victory. Finally, the routine becomes serious, from a low-level soldier to the overlord of the universe. The difficulties Zhao Feng encounters and the solutions he encounters at each stage are familiar, and there is a lack of eye-catching plot innovations. Old readers can easily guess the subsequent plot development.

Just have a period of time. The main reason is that he doesn't depict the heroine of the protagonist very much, and the writing is too popular. But the others are very fun, like what? Obtain Earth Dragon. If possible, I strongly recommend that the author add a story about the protagonist becoming emperor later on.

No wonder Ashes is becoming more and more wet. The relationship is due to the release of a new book. Since a new book is released, why not speed up the progress of Ashes? It is always watery. I write three chapters for one chapter. I will continue to write the same content after finishing this chapter and continue to write the next chapter. I have saved it for a week and haven't read the same thing. What's the point? It slows down the update speed of new books. Ashes is also becoming more and more useless because of the energy spent on new books. It is not pleasing to both sides. Ashes is unfinished. The new book is slow to update and not many people will read it.

As a side story, this part is quite satisfactory so far. The beginning is a bit similar to Knight, which brought me back some of the feelings I had back then. The background of this book is somewhat similar to that of the Earth. I have seen some people say that the protagonist is relatively flat. In my opinion, Xiaodou's books are more like records of different worlds. The main point is the story, not the protagonist. The protagonist is just one of the perspectives, which is convenient and better for immersion. Also, I don't know what this world will eventually develop into as a small experiment by Thane. I wish the third part of Xiaodou can score 9.6. 😄

Well enough. , Just him. , It's too short,,,

When I saw Chapter 29, the protagonist wanted to raise his own army and form a gang, I thought it was a bit funny. The protagonist has no ideals, no ideas, no principles, no strength, and his ambitions are all imposed by the author. How about raising wool? I persisted until chapter 44, I just couldn't stand it anymore! During the breakout battle, we captured the second highest position and launched a wave of defensive counterattacks. They didn't even know how to arrange troops to defend dangerous passes. The writer knew nothing about the layout of the war, let alone the overall situation. Don't write about war, write about the city! What's particularly offensive is Chapter 44. The protagonist, a rising star, calls himself "little brother" to an unfamiliar superior officer. Is it appropriate? What about emotional intelligence? Too hasty? The author may have only worked in a company, and the characters and personalities are not soldiers, but company employees. I have too little experience, I don't like learning, I don't like thinking, it can be seen between the lines, except for imagination, everything else is really poor. Children will be happy to see it, but adults will suffer from it. Again, I suggest the author write about cities. War is not your forte.

This book is similar to Knight's Beginning

It's good, but a little too short. I really want to wait for a while before reading it, but after all, it is Xiaodou's new book. I still have to support it.

Do. Can you update six chapters a day?

Why! I have only read two works by this author. Knight lost interest after reading over ten million words. Ashes was halfway through five million words. This one also lost interest after reading about three hundred chapters. There are all kinds of long-winded beeps and beeps. No wonder every book has more than ten million words. It is so good! The author's mathematics skills are very poor. The population of the protagonist's country is set at 20 to 30 million. After eight years of war, the country was destroyed. In order to exaggerate the cruelty of the war, how many people died in this war and how many people froze to death and starved to death that winter. The most important thing is that the population in the occupied areas was all captured by the invaders to mine. A large part of the people had to be transported back to the invaded country to work as mining slaves. As a result, when the protagonist started the war to restore the country, the domestic population was still over 20 million? Wu Xin was watching at the back, and he skipped a chapter to read it, and found that there was actually another plane invasion war later? These citizens are really invincible Xiaoqiang... I hate super long novels, they are so confusing.