The Online Rival I’ve Traded Insults with for Three Years Turns Out to Be the Campus Belle Senior

The article also includes a chat between the author and his senior sister, which is very interesting and lively. The plot advances at a decent pace, and the writing is very sweet. It is adapted from the author's personal experience.

I'm telling you some of my opinions. It may not be accurate. Please forgive me. I think it's well written. It's a sweet story, but , first of all, the pace is a bit too fast, it can be slower, don't rush, and narrate slowly. For example, the relationship between the two of them can be very proactive at first, but the stage of consent is a little more tortuous, and the last two are successful. Secondly, the protagonist is a little too smooth, it seems that everything is the best arrangement, everyone It's good that everyone has their own character traits, but having several people fall in love with the protagonist and becoming the squad leader makes me feel like the system has been opened, hahahahahaha. Also, many people have their own stories, which is a bit repetitive. After his story is told, listening to his story will be boring. The rest of the story depends on your performance, come on! Believe you! !

It's not too much to give yourself a good review, right? Newcomers are on the road, everyone is merciful ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ If you have any suggestions, please tell me directly. The audience comes first. In addition, some chapters are actually written by seniors. Can you tell? ❛˓◞˂̵✧

Hakiyu, look at what kind of science fiction film you wrote. This sweet little novel is so interesting and spicy. Cece so fast cece😏 The author's internet speed is too fast, and he seems to be an expert surfer too. The length is not long and you can read it in a while. The pace is a bit fast and it is not as tedious and routine as other school books. You have already met the parents. It feels like it is at least in the middle stage. Needless to say, the content is just as sweet as it is sweet. The details of high school and college are very real, and it seems that they are also from students. Science fiction movie! Science fiction movie! After watching it, it's time for the brothers to go back to the cave☺️

Good-looking, good-looking

So why is this book not popular😡

Very good book, highly recommended

I have to write the second review I wrote after watching Qimao. I have never logged into my mobile phone before watching Qimao. I specially registered it for this comment. This love novel is the strangest love story I have ever seen. Originally, I didn't think it was a big deal because there are others with similar names. But in this novel, you can see the real-life dialogue between the author and his girlfriend (future wife) in the sentences, and almost everyone in this novel has some bad experience or story in reality. It is really interesting to read. I felt distressed and excited to read it, and here I want to tell you why I posted this review, because I saw the latest chapter is also the author's dialogue with (Sister Jing), it was so sincere, the author said that I cried while writing it, and I cried while reading it. As soon as I finished reading, I had the urge to review and give this book a good review, and I did. Only those who have truly experienced unforgettable memories can write such a vital article. Author, I sincerely hope that you can go to the end with Qian Qian (remember the notification when you get married (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)), Sister Jing will be really happy. The last thing I want to say is that I accompanied my cousin to watch Hua Chenyu's concert last night. She had Hua Chenyu's songs and us to support her. In fact, she was in a normal mood... Hua Chenyu has a lyric: I thought about leaving. Existing in this way is because of those narrations, those gestures, those hurts ~ I don't want to leave. When you said that you are still here, I suddenly started to look forward to it inexplicably. (I am a high school dormitory student. I will come back to read this comment below on Friday night. I will write a comment for the second time. I will not forget it Haihan)

Is the author so fantastical? So far away from me, luck value +n

I haven't seen any uncomfortable parts after reading it. The pace of the whole chapter is also very slow and not dense, which makes me feel good to read on. I also don't feel that the progress is too fast. I guess it's because I also like novels that progress too fast. After looking at all the author information in the discussion so far, this book is 100% autobiographic by the author. I hope Xie Yaoling will gradually get better in the future, at least there will be light in her eyes. When I saw your past, I actually felt the same for some reason. Maybe I felt it better. This is the first time in so many years that I have seen my own experience written into a novel. It is very novel. To be honest, when I know that this is your own experience, I envy you. ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧. You are very happy to have a senior who loves you and a group of good brothers around you. I wish the author and senior to go on for a long time and live forever, and I also wish the author to be happy every day in his career as a doctor.