I Really Know How to Make Elixirs

I feel that this book is worth reading. Nearly life and death are eliminated. If you don't have the power of grade 5000, please don't read it.

Fortunately, I hope there will be better works coming out, keep working hard.

Well written

Rory! Everyone is like a fool, there is no logic, there are more supporting characters than the main characters, you understand the theme line and write it, it is a good story, but the person who wrote it can't stand it!

Um, if you want to describe Zhu Bingyao, she's weird and wonderful, but how do you look at it and act on it? A bit ex. The same goes for the male protagonist. Why would you let that boy named Zhou have sex with a woman who can do everything she wants? You are thinking that Zhu Bingyao is not attentive to you, so you are interested in Zhu Bingyao and want to ride? What kind of plot is this?

Those who have overcome the calamity are reborn. Still tmd indecisive. You're still practicing like a chicken. Eunuch book will die soon.

The plot jumps a lot, it's a bit nonsensical, and there are a lot of typos. In short, after reading it, I felt that it ended hastily, it was rushed, and I didn't take the work seriously.

Too wordy

The logic is confusing, and the protagonist is written less and less 🧠. A great master in the tribulation period is reincarnated and reborn, just like a restless young man. The first heroine is written to be very annoying, and I want her to disappear every minute.

It's too long-winded to be refreshing. It makes me sad to see