Borrowing the Laws of the Heavens, I Rule the Immortal Realm

To put it simply, I have read two packages of this novel with more than 80 chapters. Basically, I have not seen any poisonous points, and it seems quite enjoyable. One thing that makes me feel strange is Zhang Qian. He is a bit strange. It can be said that Li Guangwang and the useless dog have their own destiny. Zhang Qian did not explain at all. The elements of this novel are a bit complicated, and there are more or less shadows in the strange story about the perfect rules of the sky, but the blending is okay. From the current plot, the nine heavens and ten places are all little Karami, and the real horror is still to come.

There are so many chapters... This kind of symbol cannot be fully described in words. For example, waiting for hair to fall, Bian Bian would write like this: Wait... Frustrated

The first 100 or so chapters are pretty good, but the 300 chapters start to fail. There are very few Tiandao borrowing cards. There is another very crucial point. The author must write ellipses. He can't type without ellipses. A few ellipses can still be used as symbols. As a result, this article has 10,000 words and 1,000 words of ellipses. Just use them when talking. 𤤗 Use touch and narration, but the narration is not enough, and the plot is more procrastinating than speaking.

I won't go into details about it, but there is a problem with the setting of this story outline. Even the simplest logic cannot be self-consistent. All dark things have to be triggered by the protagonist one by one. Is one empire the same as the world? What setting is this? They are all cultivating immortals. Going out is not just a matter of making an appointment with mortals. Are all those cultivators from big families? Simple logic doesn't make sense. I can't stand it anymore.

Is this the only thing this book deserves? This is no better than the recommended ones

The writing is so frustrating that even a dog on the roadside can come and scold the protagonist.