Taoyuan Immortal Lord

Too much nonsense and poor pretense. I didn't want to read it after only a few chapters🥱

As soon as it is passed down, it becomes arrogant before it grows up.

The books are all the same. The protagonist must be a person whose family is broken, impoverished, and abandoned. Why don't you come up with something else?

Show off all the time, show off all the time, no matter who I fight, I will talk nonsense for a few chapters first, and then start showing off again the whole time.

Ok ok

The theme of your novel is a mountain village peach garden. However, after you, the protagonist, received the inheritance from the mountain, you just fight and kill. There is no trace of the mountain village peach garden. Moreover, you, the protagonist, did not kill those who should be killed, and killed all those who should not be killed. This is different from the theme.

He was too arrogant and unreasonable from the beginning.