My Substitute Marriage Was Supposed to Leave Me a Widow, but I Had Two Children in Three Years

Later, I felt that the heroine was becoming more and more selfish. Is it my problem? When problems arise after a divorce, they always refer to the fact that they are divorced. If there is a dispute with the male protagonist, the male protagonist must bow his head first, otherwise it will be forgotten. If something happens, just say "We are divorced anyway"

The heroine is pretentious and pretentious, but also responsible and upright. It's not in line with the actual situation. Don't watch it. It's disgusting.

The plot is really wild and unrealistic, and it's particularly awkward because it's just time travel and there's no space or anything like that. As a result, many things are not realistic at all. I just can't stand it

I don't know what's going on with the heroine. She's too preoccupied and not decisive. She has no desire to continue reading. I barely read all 8 chapters.

It looks fine from the beginning, but there are a lot of typos, and even a guessing reader can read it. The chaos started when Ping An was abducted by his own mother. He was only abducted once, but the content he wrote seemed like twice. I read them all later.

It's quite interesting, but the story is too long. A bit verbose, but overall it's okay.

I don't like this heroine either. The reborn person really has no strength and loves to commit suicide.

Too wordy, too many things to do