Back to 80: from a Fishing Village to the Ocean

Conflict for the sake of conflict refers to the protagonist's aunt and the protagonist's cousin. There is no explanation before. In this chapter, an aunt, uncle, and cousin come, and there are all kinds of conflicts. They really do everything for the conflict.

It feels like there are more descriptions of various things.

Haha, I can't stand it until halfway through. The mother has such a temper and the main character, haha, he was bullied to death.

It's really annoying to have to describe everything.

After reading the written content, I skipped through the next dozens of chapters. The beginning of this book is okay, the foreshadowing is in place, the story unfolds slowly, and the story is grounded and develops in a down-to-earth manner. It almost gets interesting later on: the timeline is confusing, and I don't know if it's an expression problem or a typo; the relationship between the characters can also be written wrong, and the sister is written as a daughter; mobile phones and online platforms have come out, more than once, and I don't know if the author was confused or if he hired someone to write for him. The story has always been relatively plain (the storage bag appears in the underwater tomb section in the middle). It is still a small fish at over 1.7 Million words. At this rate, if you want to dominate the ocean, you will have to write tens of millions more words! Can't watch anymore

I can't stand it anymore after reading half of it. You can either just make up your mind and write a chronological article with common sense information. Why don't you look up more information? A dozen kilograms of Plum Tong fish? Protecting animals in 1983? What about counterfeit banknotes from 1984?

Awesome, I really can't stand it anymore

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 38. The protagonist is so incompetent and useless, and the stepfather like this is trying to survive to keep readers angry. Reborn in 1980, I have no means at all and can't even deal with scoundrels.

Is this writing a novel? Those who don't know better think you are describing the environment. To put it nicely, it's a modifier, but to be more direct, it's too watery. It's just a harpoon to introduce half a chapter. It's okay to write down occasionally. The key is that you can't grasp the rhythm. No matter what, you have to introduce it for a long time!

It's good-looking, the plot is exciting, the drama is ups and downs, and the writing is realistic.