The Day the System Erased Her, She Knelt and Begged Me to Forgive Her

There's nothing to say, why can't we just cut it into two parts? But... I don't want to say anything. Apart from this, other places are fine.

The male protagonist travels through the book and holds the system. The villain is actually very weak. However, the male protagonist is toyed with by the villain like a Ruozhi, and then the female protagonist makes the male protagonist deeply affectionate. The emotional outlook and worldview shown in the next moment make people want to vomit.

In Dagger Sheep, the male protagonist is like the legendary Stockholm Syndrome patient. Every time he speaks a few words, he is heartbroken, uncomfortable, moved, etc. 🐢The man can no longer describe him. The writing is really useless. I can't even think about how the other 28 people gave it a rating of 9.6. Did they give it out of conscience?

In fact, they just torture each other. After the female protagonist tortured the male protagonist, the male protagonist survived, but now the situation is reversed. But it's a pity that the second female lead is the most suitable for a single-minded and affectionate man like the male protagonist.

🐢Men's Literature

These 9.6 Points are for tricking the dog into killing it.

At 9:06, I feel that the author hired someone to polish it. The emotional writing style is quite poor. At the same time, even though the male protagonist has a big advantage, he is still hindered by some one-sided and meaningless things. It feels like a knife for the sake of a knife. I don't recommend it.

After reading it, the writing is really confusing. The hero and heroine will lose their memory in the next chapter for what they have done. It has nothing to do with everything. It is better to go from the low point to the peak in 30 days and let the hero have a death ending. Rebirth or time travel and restart. However, I shouldn't have so many expectations for a medium-length novel adapted from a short story. I'm sorry to the author.

Very uncomfortable to watch

Shit, all my dreams are prettier than this. In the early stage, the protagonist was a 🐢 man. They all said they didn't like him and licked him in the face, and the person who was the general manager of the group was beaten several times by gangsters. In the middle stage, it was okay, so-so. Then he just came out of the relationship and seamlessly transitioned to the next one. One, I was in love with him for about a month and fell in love with him to death. The author is in need of love. I don't understand how someone can really give up his life after only being in a relationship for a month. Does that mean that if you break up with this person, you will only be in a relationship with him for a few days before he is heartbroken again?