Martial Arts

When I looked at the protagonist's cultivation and the progress, I thought it wasn't finished yet, but I didn't expect~~I can write the ending~~

It's a routine book, and it has no originality or highlights. I don't like it.

It doesn't look good. The skills, martial arts, and killing are too messy. The whole world wants to kill the protagonist. Is it good to look at half black and half white? The protagonist should be a good person, trash, and fool.

I can't even write clearly about the realm of cultivation, so you can't write it like a chicken feather

The writing is too poor, there is too much nonsense, and there are too many contradictions.

The writing is a bit like a primary school student memorizing a running account

Please, check more after you finish writing. There are too many typos, making the meaning of the sentence unclear.

Anticlimactic…

The ending is rushed and the author is so incompetent.