I Told You to Govern the Frontier, Not Don the Imperial Robes!

Since ancient historical texts are of a historical nature, you can either write them as fantasy novels. I believe your red cannon has a range of 100 miles. Even if you say that an archer has a range of 100 miles, I believe it! You are writing a historical time travel story, but your red cannon can shoot 100 miles with rifling? You can hit 10 miles with really good steel. Don't brag. Can't you have some common sense? After a little online searching, the current range of howitzers seems to be only 30-40 kilometers! Can you shoot 50 kilometers with one broken bronze cannon? Even if the author shot out the bone marrow, it would not reach 50 kilometers! It's so embarrassing to watch! 🙈

With a score of 70, it is considered a good piece of writing among the princes. I have to say that the fictional world built by the author is amazing! From the unique political structure, the overt and covert struggles between different forces, to the different social classes and the daily life of the people at the bottom, they are all vividly depicted. Take the Prince's Military Exhibition for example. The strangely dressed pedestrians on the streets, the strange-style buildings, and the unique trading methods instantly drew me into this world full of freshness. It didn't feel awkward at all because there was no real historical basis. The portrayal of the protagonist Yang Ning is very likable. He is not the kind of being who is born invincible. He is also afraid of making mistakes and failing at the beginning. When faced with major choices related to the direction of the world, as well as emotional entanglements that were constantly being sorted out and turned into chaos, his inner entanglement and struggle made me empathize with him. Fortunately, the protagonist has an unwillingness to admit defeat in his bones. He relies on his intelligence and courageous actions to gain a foothold in this strange world step by step. Every time I see him come back from a desperate situation, I can't help but cheer for him. The refreshing feeling brought by this kind of growth and transformation is the charm of male novels. The supporting characters are no less impressive, each with their own background and goals. Their love and hatred with the protagonist make the whole story more exciting. The overall evaluation is four stars, which is considered a good piece of fiction in fictional history.

Just keep showing off and slap in the face, no level at all

A lump

The idea is unprecedented, the unique character structure expresses different characters and personalities in a unique way, which is 4 stars that cannot be reflected in previous novels⭐

Nice