Make Love

As soon as I read this novel, I felt that there were too many flaws. First of all, the heroine was drugged when she visited other people's homes. No matter how good-looking she is, no one can drug other guests when she is a guest in other people's homes. Secondly, it's the same kind of violation. If the male protagonist has money, power and good looks, it's okay? You don't even know who the other person is, so you just accept it? Thirdly, the heroine is also the concubine of the Yushi family. Even if she is not favored, there is no reason for her to be a concubine. Then I only updated a small part and advised the author not to write it. There was a problem with the logic.

I haven't written a book review for a long time. Log in to write one. Overall it's pretty good, the plot is compact and the characters are full of character However, the overall writing style is a bit childish, and the logic is slightly unreasonable and superficial. For example, the male protagonist clearly knew that he took the pill given by the female protagonist to save his life, but he still failed to rescue the female protagonist in time, which is obviously suspected of causing a conflict. Or maybe it was too easy for the heroine to get the corruption list and evidence and bring the complaint to the imperial court and end it. But I feel that the author's future will be limitless if he writes two more books.

It's really beautiful. I look forward to the update every day. Sisters, close your eyes and rush.

Very pretty

The beginning is a good start, the middle and the end are pulpy