Invest in Prodigies for Ten Thousandfold Returns: I Overthrow the Empress and Become King

It seems okay so far, but the performance of the protagonist is not that strong, and the heroine is not very likable.

The plot is okay, not a mindless harem

A good work is definitely not the work of one person. I hope you guys can discuss it more and correct mistakes.

It seems okay, it would be better if the male lead was more cold and domineering

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There are too many questions, I can't explain clearly, the logic is messed up, and the preface often does not match the follow-up. It feels like the author just comes up with an idea, suddenly has an idea, and then writes directly without any foreshadowing. The speaking style is often the same as the Internet buzzwords ten years ago, and the palette is still there, three points for this and four points for that. The absurd prince identity that I wrote at the beginning must have attracted people to see you write about sensuality, but it turned out that you stopped writing half of the scenes with women, and you wrote about the struggle for no reason, but you couldn't understand it. At first, I thought the heroine was Liu, but in the end I kept rejecting it. She really became a maid. The system also wrote it stupidly, there are too many unnecessary parts