Fantasy: a Fool Starts, Starts Training with Orion

A very good novel, the killing is decisive, it is sentimental and righteous, there is not too much blood, the plot is also good, it is worth reading

It was a little slow to warm up in the early stages. But the main character is very smart. Very wise and decisive in killing.

The beginning was okay. After a few chapters, the writing became more and more messy. I learned everything. It was a mess. Let's go.

The author has no idea about bows at all, or only a little idea, and the more he listens to it, the more he becomes confused. It talks about the elasticity of the bow string... Well... What bow string has elasticity? Also, the bow should be unstrung when not in use, rather than left hanging all the time.

The story is well told and the writing is concise. The update is just too slow.

It was okay at first, but the good reviews that deceived me became worse the more they wrote 88

Due to some force majeure reasons, this book can only end here. I'm sorry for those book friends who are still reading, but I really have no way to continue. Some time ago, my mother was critically ill and was admitted to the hospital and had to be taken care of. I couldn't write words. I continued after I stopped. I had no feeling at all. I felt like I was in the water all the time and I no longer had the mood to continue writing! Anyway, I'm so sorry! Very detailed and logical! Keep writing as before, tens of millions of words! Come on! Generally speaking, the beginning was good, but something happened and it ended quickly!

Goldfinger grade is too low! There are more restrictions!

Not bad, but there is no emotional line. The male protagonist is a man after all.

It looks good from the beginning, but after the main character's master dies, the author won't be able to write anymore, and it's a mess of hammers and sticks here and there.