Shock! After Cultivating Immortality, I Was Managed by the System!

It's very funny. The heroine is very interesting and she is a talented player. The hosting mode of the system is really funny. It directly empowers the demon king. It made me laugh to death. After the demon king was raped, the heroine actually lost a tael of silver. It made me laugh so hard, I hope the author will write more, I can't get enough of it, I just can't get enough of it. , I am looking forward to the development of things later.

It's been a long, long time since I've seen such a beautiful article about cultivating immortality! The crazy and cute heroine, a group of super friendly brothers and sisters, and the imaginative plot direction hahahaha I love it so much! ! ! ! In the second chapter of the opening chapter, the system rewards a "Top Taoist Companion" hahahaha. The pace of the whole book is very fast, without any delay or moisture at all! It's been a long time since I've been so satisfied with a fairy tale! ! Please author update soon! ! !

It was good in the early stage, but poor in the later stage, and its combat power collapsed. The heroine in the Golden Elixir stage (even if there are 18 Golden Elixirs that can be directly promoted to Nascent Soul), the author said that the differences between each realm are very different, but the heroine crossed three realms in a row to kill the Transformation God stage (even if the Transformation God stage was seriously injured, she wouldn't be killed by the heroine across three realms, right?)

It was okay at the beginning, but when it came to the competition, I couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the characters were broken, the plot was a bit exaggerated, and a bit childish. The heroine's outlook was wrong, and people who didn't offend her were humiliated, and she was a bit vicious.

It looked good in the early stage, but after the competition, it felt a bit... Well, how should I put it, double standards, and a bit confusing. Anyway, I was often criticized after that. Anyway, it looked a bit awkward to me, but it was really good before the competition, and it was really messy afterward.

The front is nice, but the back is not. The heroine is very childish, a bit like Sumary, and what about her senior brother? In a cave, a cultivator poured cold water on himself and then hugged that senior brother to cool down? I'm already in the world of cultivation. Can you please stop being so speechless when I read it? . . . Is it right to force it together? I don't understand. The more I look at it, the more confusing it becomes. It's very awkward.

The first reaction of the heroine after she rapes the hero is excitement. If it were me, I would feel humiliated and ashamed. In the novel, it is said that the fourth brother did not hesitate to reveal his identity as a monster for the heroine, and also for the sake of his tribesmen, and let the tribesmen hurt him, but the key is that the heroine is still angry? It's obviously just for her, but I don't understand why the fourth senior brother likes the heroine so much. The heroine obviously looks like Xiaojiabiyu, so how did he fall in love with her? I really hate the heroine's character. (Purely personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Well

I don't like the character design of the master. Many articles of this type now assign a nonsensical master to the heroine, which is not reliable at all. Although it will be reversed later, I still think it would be better if the heroine went to a normal summit. There is also a heroine who is silly and sweet. She always says the wrong things and has very low emotional intelligence. She only takes care of people when things happen. Although stewardship is a very innovative point, the character of the heroine is not outstanding at all.

The early setting is very eye-catching. Probably when the martial arts competition begins and enters the secret realm, it becomes chaotic. Immortal cultivators use water to cool down and still have fever. They are ruthless in robbing resources. That place where big birds dare not go is just a ghost beating the wall and the Water Dragon King is gone. The setting that the fourth senior brother is a monster is difficult to comment on. I gave up on it.