Only After I Died Did I Realize That I Was the Crown Prince's Pet Peeve

After reading the whole book, I still felt that it was a bit missing. The main plot of the whole text is that the heroine is looking for the truth about her mother. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is very templated. Then it ends when the heroine finds the truth. The heroine's mother's method of recovering memory is only one chapter. The process of finding her mother written in such a long space feels very magical! Chen Xingruo is really miserable! I don't like giving bad reviews, so keep up the good work!

The halo of the heroine is too strong, and I couldn't stand the scene with Mr. Wang. When I asked for help before, I also said: Let me give you a few words of advice. Haha, if I were Mr. Wang, I would have to give the heroine a few blows. Also, what Mr. Wang writes is not like a real prominent figure in the capital, but more like a nouveau riche. I don't understand how this kind of writing is written. The heroine's profile is as big as the sky. She can be tsundere, but tsundere is not like the heroine who dominates everything in the world. It made me laugh to death. Please ask the author to use his brain a little when writing, and don't just focus on being happy.

The description for the male protagonist was too humble, and the female protagonist's mother's affairs were not described in detail, so I ended up writing about recovering my memory. I just felt that the writing was not delicate enough.

Next time I really need to listen to my advice, and read a story about a male and female protagonist directly into the heroine looking for her mother, without a heavy rain

The more I look at it, the more speechless I become. Zheng Leisheng's ending is what he deserves. He used despicable methods to steal other people's wives. He actually likes Kong Shimei. What did he do when she was not married? Why didn't she chase her? When she was squeezed by the Kong family, what did she do? Why didn't she rescue her? I'm really speechless. I can't see where I love her. There are also too few emotional connections between the male and female protagonists, and there is no explanation of what happened next between Shen Qingchuan and the female protagonist's best friend. All in all, it doesn't look good.

The plot is okay, but the ending is really regretful. The story of Shen Qingchuan chasing the heroine's best friend is not mentioned at all. Moreover, after Kong Shimei regained his memory, he didn't have to look for the heroine again, and the hero and heroine were obviously okay with the good things that happened. In short, the plot of the whole story is good, but it is unfinished.

The characters in this novel are all love-minded, except for the second heroine. The male protagonist is made to look too humble, and the heroine can make him swoon with just one smile 😂

Gentle, considerate and loyal dog male protagonist

Scribbling, inconsistent with the image

Do it again, it won't look good