Survival: Defending Against Natural Disasters from a Broken Grass Hut

1. There are many typos and bugs. 2. Talents cannot be used correctly. For example, the talent on the second day is to gain critical hits. Opening treasure chests can get critical hits, and treasure chests can also be traded. So what is the protagonist doing? The protagonist is opening a map. Although it is necessary to open the map, it doesn't matter if it is postponed for a day. 3. The protagonist likes to collect supplies, such as silk quilts. There are many of them, so why not exchange them for other things. This should be a necessity for others, especially the strong ones in the early stage. Sleep is crucial and must be in demand, but the protagonist chooses to let it languish. To sum up, it is a flowchart whose IQ is not online.

There is something wrong with this author.👏 What's wrong? 🤔

Ever since I met the wolf, the number of words has been endless, which is boring!

The early settings are very interesting In the middle and later stages, I began to forcibly learn about the world view, and became forcibly profound. Could you please check if there are any typos before sending it out? The first barrage confrontation can be seen in a survival game. I was also drunk. The protagonist was blocked for a while, and there were a lot of people who were blocked. After that, there were a lot of people who made me laugh to death.

The front looks fine, but the back looks confused! Can you write a normal survival story? The writing is very messy. It doesn't matter if you are a lone wolf or competing for hegemony in the later stage. But if you start writing about the system and the rules in a mess, to be honest, it's not that good! The second natural disaster is like this and everything is still illusory? My mind was in a mess after seeing it! Abandoned the book! It is recommended to re-open the book! I really can't stand this book anymore!

Recently I like to watch apocalyptic movies. I can watch them regardless of whether the plot is dull or imaginative. However, I don't like movies that are too watery. A simple or unnecessary action needs to be explained clearly. Are you worried that the readers are all in kindergarten?

What a mess! It's all typos and bad sentences.

I don't quite understand the author. You've lost your mind after reading Tokaru. If you want to write a mindless and cool article, just write a mindless and cool article as soon as you think of it. Is the author an adult? Is it possible to clearly identify your audience? Your works are so messed up that you can't even identify them? . Is it interesting to pursue messianic ideas blindly? Can the reader use no brain and the author finish writing without using any brain? I don't even know the statistics, so I don't know what survival essay to write.

10 Mung bean-sized blueberries can be exchanged for the same resources as egg-sized meat. What kind of life do you want with this IQ? You can just commit suicide and suffer less. Anyway, living with this IQ is a waste of air.

There are so many typos