Banned by the National Team, I Grind My Way to Soccer Stardom in La Liga

No bragging, no slander, just cool writing. There is no love or hatred, and the characters are generally drawn, just like those of cultivating immortals. When you meet a stronger person, you become stronger, and the protagonist is invincible. I wrote 80 chapters out of what should have been 500 chapters, either in training or playing football, occasionally interspersed with some sarcastic and fan-favored nonsense from fans. It's okay to read a daily article, but after something delayed, I didn't want to come back to read it. I hope the author will write more side plots, such as what kind of organization, what kind of manipulation is required if the dog dealer fails, haha, I will just give you an example, and it would be nice to have a clearer description of the game. There are 22 referees on the field, refer to the Japanese comic "Blue Forbidden Zone", come on, praise it.

Very good, why doesn't anyone see it?

The writing is very average, as if you don't know how to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness without using side descriptions. The whole text is filled with other people's comments to illustrate it, and you can only describe it in this way. There is almost no game or action on the field, and there is no sense of danger. The passionate feelings, excited fans, and joy of victory are all emotions that cannot be described in words. Too bland,

After seeing Chapter 51, I am not interested in reading anymore. I don't really like Bai Ye's character. He is just a Meng Hulu, and he is a bit mythical. The dream of Barcelona and Real Madrid are the passion in the hearts of the fans of an era. They are the splendid scenes of two unparalleled heroes competing. You can write about three heroes competing, but it is too boring to write about one person being invincible. I feel that the protagonist is playing football in Meng Hulu. He has already played in the Champions League and why not give good news to his family? Don't ordinary families improve their lives? Lacks ups and downs, passion, and emotion!!!!

The biggest problem is that there are a lot of digressions, but the description of the game is very enjoyable.

Very good

When you write about a game, you write about the game. When you write a narration, you write a narration. Why are you suddenly trying to popularize something that has nothing to do with the game when you are writing about a game?? It's so treacherous and verbose!

It's perfect so far. It's a cool article.

Fantasy football, fantasy goals. All kinds of running tactics are mentioned in one stroke. It can be seen that the author rarely watches football games. Each team has a unique style. The gorgeous Real Madrid and the iron-blooded Atletico Madrid are both clumsy and poorly written.

It's pretty good. It's a relatively good novel.