The Ups and Downs of Phoenix Lord

Can you write another extra story? Nothing has been explained clearly. Is it over? ? ? There is also a foreshadowing in the front about taking Mu Shuiyao and the others to the Fool's Continent to create the strongest army for the heroine. Why haven't you finished speaking? It ended hastily and the male and female protagonists haven't gotten married yet. All right. My child, I beg you to finish writing. Beg on your knees.

It's so well written that it ended before I had enough. It's not like the routine of most time travel novels, but it has a lot more humor. Some of the plots are explained in a hurry and are a bit passed over in one stroke. It would be better if it is expanded and written. I look forward to more good novels ^_^

Generally speaking, why does the author make so many mistakes? It doesn't explain clearly, the heroine is too weak, and the ending is too hasty... I hope the author can update the second part, or have a second volume, at least the male and female protagonists should not be so cruel, this knife stabbed me blood... If the author has another book, I hope it can be written better. (Come on, author)! ! !

The ending is all up to imagination

The ending is really rushed and I didn't watch enough. I hope the author can provide a sequel.

The heroine is not very strong. She doesn't use her brain when doing things. She is just what others say. When she encounters danger, she has little resistance. She relies on others. There are many typos and sentences that don't make sense. Everything is good. It's just that the heroine is too weak.

It's very good, but it's a little short. A little longer would be fine. The female protagonist is not only independent but also relies on her own efforts to climb up step by step. The male protagonist is not very good to the female protagonist at the beginning, but she can still do it later.

It's a bad novel, and there are still many foreshadowings that have no results. There is no conclusion about how the male and female protagonists resolve the family conflicts in the end. Whether the male protagonist's mother wakes up in the end is still a mystery. There is no conclusion about the warmth of the female protagonist. I won't pursue the typos anymore. I just feel that my ability has been inexplicably improved and defeated several elders in one fell swoop.

The plot is particularly exciting and different from what I have seen before. Although the male and female protagonists have conflicts and quarrel, they will reconcile in the end. This is true love, but I did not see the male and female protagonists getting married! ! !

The ending was a little rushed, but the rest was okay!