I Started with a Seed. Fortunately, I Have Probability Glasses.

I saw the latest chapter 99 and came to review it. It is a very interesting book that I highly recommend. The setting of planting spirits is quite novel, and the protagonist is not a virgin. I feel that it is quite decisive in killing. It is more of a cool article. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it with probability eye fishing. The author is a novice. I also read another book by the author and found out that there is one book that I have read before and saw more than 100 pictures. I don't know why I didn't read it, but this one has indeed made real progress. Next, I would like to give some suggestions. First, the image created in this book is a bit single. If you want to create a strong character image, you must have contrast. For example, while the protagonist is decisive in killing, you can add a little warmth in a certain situation. Then include the cook, you can write a little growth flow, the group portrait is very popular, the murderous cook slowly progresses, and the Virgin leader, emmm, if there is no contrast in the later stage, I really beg you not to write into the protagonist group as the heroine, this character is very easy to explode. Of course, if you like it very much selfishly, the opposite of this is righteousness. The foreshadowing is to lean on this aspect. Second, currently you are doing tasks and so on. You have to pave the way for a big world view. For example, in the later stage, you will discover some secrets, or add some new dungeons or something. As the protagonist grows step by step, he is also seeing the scenery of this world. Standing high and seeing far, some teacher-type NPCs are also very important to carry out puzzle solving. Third, author, please don't forget that there are also many female readers. Some emm plots can be reduced if possible. If you want to adjust the atmosphere in this book, you don't have to do it. Otherwise, it will be easy to write ex, and it will be easy to persuade some female readers. I don't ask you to be clean in male videos. At least don't mess around. Fourth, I think you can add a little introduction and introduction to plants appropriately. It is best to include plants that exist in real life, but many people don't know about them. You can add a little bit of popular science content. Fifth, refer to popular books of the same type to gain experience. It doesn't matter how fast you write, but you are down-to-earth in each chapter, which can be regarded as accumulating popularity and experience for your future work. Now you are laying the foundation, maybe you will be the first on the hot list this year (painting the pie) Sixth, although it is a niche article, since you mentioned data, make sure your numbers are as correct as possible. If you still have a lot of experience, you have reached hundreds of thousands now. If you don't want to write so many numbers later, you can convert to a unit. As for skills and equipment, you can also create some tasks similar to the equipment series. I quite like the divination cards. I can refer to novel monsters and copies, the fire world, Cthulhu, world cycles, supernatural things, etc. Or it depends on whether you want to add a pet system later. I think this union is quite good. Seventh, I can't think of it at the moment. One of the things I pay more attention to when reading novels is the creation of characters + the interest and coherence of the plot (don't be too watery in one chapter) + humorous and high-level writing + an appropriate world view. If you write these things, your book will definitely be great, ❌ The Eunuch or the Abandoned Pit Come on, come on, author, I promise you a long review, I will draw you a pie, and I will give you all the tickets for next month, hahaha, don't let the readers down ~ The author is brave to fly

It's a very novel subject matter, and the author's writing style is very good after being tempered by three books. There are no typos and the plot flows smoothly. The protagonist and supporting characters have normal IQs and do not slow down their intelligence. There is no drag on the plot. The author explains that there is no harem. The author has written that the combat power has not collapsed so far, and the data has not been written randomly. It is a good book worth reading, and a book with potential (can the author provide some details?)

To be honest, I think this book is quite good. The author is also very friendly and can interact with readers. I suggest that the author write less plots about the male protagonist's late-night passion. After all, there are still female readers, but it is already very good (manually like it) Overall, it's okay. The plot is quite enjoyable, and the setting of the guild and the spirit plant is also very novel. The guild is not an all-female one, but it's a harem type. I'm particularly surprised. I like it very much (Flowers) Then combined with the pet beast, the plot of the article is also good, and the writing style is also quite delicate. It is very comfortable to read. Personally, I feel it is a bit messy, but I just like this kind of article. It can be regarded as fulfilling a dream I had when I was a student. The author has a lot of updates every day, but it's really not enough to read (crying) Summary: This is a very nice novel, worth recommending, and a readable one. I wish the author Dada's new book will reach the top of the charts and his royalties will increase (I seem to remember that the author is married, if not, I didn't tell you). The author Dada and his wife will have a happy marriage for a hundred years (flowers, flowers, flowers)

The protagonist is brainless and the supporting characters are brainless. The fighting power collapsed. The plot is poisonous. The heroine is more poisonous. If Brother Shui complains, go to my homepage to read the comments and see for yourself.

The setting of planting spirits is very interesting, but it's a pity that the author went astray. There are fewer and fewer descriptions of planting spirits, and it turns into a game article.

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When I saw 70, I gave it up and expressed my personal opinion. First of all, the setting of companion plants is good and relatively novel, and even the idea of ​​parasitic dandelions is also very good! But now, I don't have the feeling that the system emphasized the importance of seeds three times at the beginning. It has completely become a pet. It is not different from each other. There will be various unique cultivation routes. In fact, there can be some low-level plants, but when combined with certain equipment or skills, the settings can work wonders, which can highlight the characteristics of the plants. The character creation is really a bit imprecise and even a bit divisive, which must be affected by my personal views. It doesn't quite fit the protagonist's decisive and decisive character that the demons who kill each other when they first meet can trust each other so easily and become partners. Of course, Dagangli may want to become the protagonist group, but it can be shaped more and have a transition. Needless to say, the Holy Mother is indeed a Holy Mother, but some of her powerful features are not fully reflected. I personally don't insist too much on the arrangement of the plot. I've seen some hydrology and a good-paced one, so I thought it was okay and not too draggy. The occasional little humor was also pretty good. Finally, this is the biggest reason for abandoning the game. In my opinion, the protagonist is a bit broken and has become a pure YY character of the author. In the early stage, as a lone ranger, even with a decisive killing character, I encountered the so-called Peach Blossom Curse (I really rolled my eyes when I saw this curse and saw that it was deliberately added for the sake of the plot). To be honest, the first thought of normal people is to figure it out on their own, or at least try. Try it, but it turns out that the protagonist waits until the plot is over, and then finally solves the curse, but still wants to find the Holy Mother, who the protagonist dislikes, which is inexplicable (even more inexplicable is that he is forced to do it again later)... Isn't the protagonist a person who has a bottom line and then keeps his promise? Either you can directly create a pornographic group, speak pornographically everywhere, take advantage of anyone, and start a harem team. Not to mention that I just saw a plot selling the so-called first guild token, and then turned around and used it myself to grab the reward of the first guild (you don't want to be a guild, so the rewards are usually related to the guild...) Anyway, in my opinion, the protagonist is no longer fresh, it is just the author's pure yy way. Finally, if you like stallion porn, you can continue. This book is very suitable and looks very enjoyable. But if you are a person who doesn't like stallions and likes to consider the logical points in the article, either read it without thinking, or just avoid lightning.

🌶︎🐔, The protagonist pretends to be calm because of the nature of the Holy Mother, and is both arrogant and upright, making people look down on her.

I have read almost 300 chapters so far. I quite like the setting of apocalypse + game + soft science fiction. Goldfinger is not too outrageous to accept (this is just right). Li Chuan's character is also okay. He is selfish, but also retains some kindness, intelligence, and is good to his own people. If there is no particularly big poisonous point later, I will chase it to the end, haha😃 (PS I know the protagonist is definitely It is the strongest, but can the other members of the Survivor Guild not be too different, such as bloodline, Li Chuan is orange legendary, and others are purple, can they be upgraded to pink? There are also pets, not to mention everyone is the same as Li Chuan, but it must be second only to Li Chuan. This is the strongest guild. Finally, author, when will the Taishang Fungi join the protagonist group⌓‿⌓)

After driving high and driving low, the protagonist fainted and started to pull. I suggest the author delete the part where the protagonist is unconscious.