Fantasy: Invincible Starts with Basic Archery Skills

Cool article, if you like watching fusion stories, just read it. The pig's feet are not green, which is very good🌝👍. The skills can be practiced very quickly and can be integrated with talents to upgrade. There are a few parts that I think are unreasonable, such as the bow in the early stage, but I ignored them and looked at it okay.

The writing at the beginning of the novel is pretty good, the male protagonist is having a great time, his combat power increases quickly, and the skill tree is very rich, so you won't get bored of it. The male protagonist is living poetically, not nesting in a dark corner like a cockroach, but making progress together with his family and friends. But Chapters 167 and 168 are too retarded. What does it mean that the male protagonist is not qualified to be brought into the imperial city? What does it mean that the male protagonist can only be considered an average genius? One month of training can kill the sixth level in an instant. This novel has only featured three named sixth level and above 😓 Then Yunxi's level can't even compare to that of a roadside guy. A county has a population of one million, but the imperial city cannot have a population of over 100 million? The male protagonist is average, so there must be at least 30 million masters of seventh grade or above. It's really sick. It's so well written that I have to feed it. It ruins the characters and world view that have been created for so long.

After reading Chapter 75, I really can't stand it anymore. The writing is really weak, not even a novice, and the data is too low. I have all kinds of perverted skills that are way ahead of others. I have a lot of unique talents. I can't beat the same level by forcefully reducing my intelligence. If you want to write a confrontation, you have to do a good job in data. The protagonist's data is so perverted that I can't beat any one. There are three rankings in the world. It's hard to imagine that others are better than you. Are there several systems? I can't understand Shuangwen Shuangwen, I can't understand data flow, I can't understand emotion, and if I write a wife for myself, what else will she do besides saying how awesome my husband is? What is your purpose of adding this character? Are you satisfied with being praised by a woman? I want to write an invincible article but force confrontation to lower my own intelligence. I wrote the system article without remembering the data flow and it is full of loopholes and chaos. There are so many examples that I can't even mention them. Becoming stronger means that the strength is increased several times and the defense speed is increased several times. If I can read Chapter 75, I am in a good state of mind.

Shuhuang can read it

It looks good, at least it suits my taste so far.

The more I look at it, the more confusing it becomes. Earlier it was said that a bottle of essence can be added by 10%, but later it became 20%. What the hell? The characterization is not good either. The woman is like a machine that improves the onmyoji of the protagonist. She only has a few sentences at a time and the character description has no feeling at all😓

There is something wrong with the character's realm. Qian Hu's realm is sometimes fourth grade and sometimes fifth grade, and there is also the principal who says it is fifth grade but also says it is unfathomable. There is also the cultivation base on the ranking list. The number one on the Fengyun small list all has the third-level peak, but as a result, the top ten on the big list don't even have the third-level peak.

In Chapter 150, he just gave up and suddenly created a double king with parents and an outrageous background. You know, the original owner is dead, and the one who survives is the time traveler. The original owner's father left a legacy to the original owner, but he had to go to a place to get it when he reached level 6 in strength around the age of 18. He also didn't give the original owner anything or any information, and also sealed the original owner's talent. Not to mention that the original owner couldn't access martial arts. Even if he came into contact with useless martial arts talent, he couldn't reach the sixth level. Also, the original owner's father is very powerful. I don't believe that he didn't know that there were cultists in the village. Even though he knew that there were cultists in the village, he found a wife with a lunar body for the original owner and then faked his death and left. This is equivalent to a rich man giving his son a treasure worth hundreds of billions in a remote mountain village with a terrorist stronghold. The son and other ordinary villagers do not know its value, but the terrorists know that the son dangles the treasure in front of the terrorists every day. He is simply looking for death. It turns out that the original owner is indeed dead, and the one who survived was the time traveler. If there were no parents and two kings, the previous plot would actually be quite reasonable. The introduction of two parents in Chapter 150 directly caused a huge conflict with the previous plot, and there was no intention to keep the son alive. If I could give it a 9 point before, I would give it a 1 point directly at chapter 150.

Not bad

It's okay, just too little